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Operatastic SuperSop
2007-02-05 . chapter 21
I agree he was a psychopath... but it takes one to know one, haha! Ok... enough of that...
I hope you don't mind me reviewing at the end. My reviewing thing doesn't always let me... it has the 'thirty second review throttle' wonderful thing that hinders me, and then I get annoyed and don't review.
I really like these. They're vivid, short, sweet, and to the point...but I was really moved by this one, 'Justice'. It's from the POV of Daroga, correct? Poor Erik... *cries*
But, anyway... the Lovers. Sorelli is quite the kiss up.
The Heirophant. Interesting. It reminds me of when I was in ballet... but she never used a stick. *shrug* not as strict.
Strength: I like the take you have on this. Most would think that Raoul is a coward for not doing it, but it shows a lot of inner strength.
I found the Hermit interesting. Poor Christine...
I really like the creative way you're using tarot cards. Please, continue, and update soon.
The Phantom of Quill and Ink
2007-01-02 . chapter 9
I don't know...! You obviously have a great imagination and you are definately a good writer. But i feel that this is not really a story in it's own right. It's just parts that you seem to pick and choose. I've read about seven or eight chapters and i feel that i'm not being gripped by any actual plot. and the chapters are too short to hold my interest. You could do so much with each tarot card, i fell disappointed that you only write a couple of paragraphs for each. But you are a good writer and it's interesting how you like to see it from all characters point of view. I cold go on but i've said to much already.
Yours
Random Phantom
maskedpainter
2006-12-29 . chapter 16
now i thought this one was neat i liked it really i do!

~MP
vicious like the blue sky
2006-12-28 . chapter 16
This is a neat idea! I like it.
Operatastic SuperSop
2006-12-27 . chapter 16
Well, there goes his tip-top opera house... and box 5. update soon
Operatastic SuperSop
2006-12-26 . chapter 15
I really liked these... it was an interesting use of tarot cards.
MindlessSavageHulk
2006-12-08 . chapter 13
as much as i love how you want to please everyone i think most everyone loves e/c pairings instead of c/r pairings but i thought even though i don't like raoul at all it was still sickingly sweet how she played with her kids

i so hate raoul but all in all i love this series!

~MP
SheeWolf85
2006-12-05 . chapter 13
You have done a great job with these. My favorites so far are The Star, Temperance and Wheel of Fortune. They are all great though. You did a great job picking which card to go with which person. Are you very familiar with Tarot? Anywho, great job, and I can't wait to see what else you have in store.

Amore Per Sempre, Hollie :P
Korrigan Moon
2006-12-04 . chapter 13
I have forgoten how much i like this fic even if it does have R/C pairings:).
Mysterylover17
2006-09-17 . chapter 9
Hmm..while I usually don't like drabbles, I find myself greatly entertained by yours. I thoroughly enjoy how you have used various versions of the Phatom story, including Leroux and Kay, instead of just using the 2004 movie as your only source of this story. Well written, just one grammatical mistake in chapter one, the how is not needed in Raoul's line. Otherwise, it's very good. Keep up the great work!
InkyManipulation
2006-09-05 . chapter 3
Hmm, I like them, but it's hard to tell what your writing about. It'd probably help if you made the chapter longer and put in how the Tarot cards tie in with it.

Otherwise, congrats on some interesting one-shots.

Heart of Sorrow
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