I love this fic! I read it a year ago and I thought I reviewd it then.Apparently I didn't,so here is my belated review.I ADORE this fic! I rearead uit and it was just as good if not better than the first read through.You grasp the characters well.I could hear the words coming from them on the show.I particularaly liked the way you wrote Chloe.She care deeply for Jack,but she isn't crushing on him like some people like to think.She has a very adult love for him.And,realistically,I believe that he would have a much better relationship with her than with Audrey.Anyway,I loved the story! It was sweet and romantic! It is one of my favorite Chlack stories! I would love to see more Chlack fics by you and a sequel to this fic would be awesome! I would love to see their first date!

that was freaking amazing!! i love jack/chloe! you did a great job! i am so thrilled. it totally made my day. if only you were on the writing board for the show ... life would be better that way! =)

Wow...! This was the best Jack/Chloe story I've ever read! Great job!

Cute Story!I loved the fight between Jack and Audrey at Chloe's.And you had Audrey in character as an annoying twit who should definitely NOT be with Jack.We all know he and Chloe were meant to be together!!Please write more!And also,this was obviously written by someone who hasn't seen the Season 6 trailer.In season 6,it's been a year since season 5,and Jack is gonig to (supposedly)be sacrificed to save the country!

it´s brilliant! they are so in character. it is very well written, i love your story, i really do!

Great! It was pretty realistic (insomuch as any JC is realistic) and and you did a nice job of showing WHY this turned out the way it did. Also, you handled Audrey very nicely. I don't particularly like her, but there's too much all-out Audrey bashing everywhere.

Morris was right! Jack is an idiot for taking so many years to see what was right in front of him the whole time. And Miles was an idiot for letting such a beautiful and loyal woman get away from him. And as for Miles, I didn't think Jack beat him up nearly enough in season 5.

Great story! I hope u win the LiveJournal thing or whatever. JC forever! i h8 audrey.

Hi, it's very strange. I've never thought about a possible relationship between Jack and Chloe. But you make it very believable. I'm looking forward to reading other stories about them.

This was an absolutely amazing story!Good work!

This is really good - well written and true to the characters. Well done!