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| Hellomoto93 2008-03-18 ch 4, | abuseOh dear... It seems you abandoned this one too. =( Please come back, I wanna know what happens... |
| LOCISVU 2008-01-05 ch 4, | abuseOh boy.Grissom should tell Sara right away before she hears it from someone else. |
| lamcsi 2007-12-26 ch 4, | abuseI like your story and I'm looking forward to an update. |
| msgrits 2007-12-04 ch 4, | abuseGlad you are back working on this story. Will Gil ever learn? He should have told Sara... |
| jenstog 2007-12-04 ch 4, | abuseAt least he regretted it?! Can't wait for more. |
| sprat 2007-12-04 ch 4, | abusenext chapter should be interesting |
| rosewingsblu 2007-12-02 ch 3, | abusehi, i just started reading your csi stories. loved your work! please will you be following up with new chapters on this and the other incomplete stories? my only suggestion and or comment is...you need to write more, more, more. keep up the great work. |
| xxCSILoverxx 2007-07-13 ch 3, | abuseYea! Man, Lady Belle, you SO just didn't!! NO! oh *! Sara's gunna be ** when she finds out! dumb cliffies. my least fav thing in the world: cliffhangers! GR!! plz update soon cuz i can't wait for the next chappie! =] |
| SaraLou 2007-07-13 ch 3, | abuseomg! just found this today. you have to continue this. why did grissom agree to see his ex-wife? |
| cutieme012 2007-03-07 ch 3, | abuseok,... that was dumb of him, this is gsr right? update soon! |
| PurplePopple 2007-02-24 ch 3, | abuseAre you planning on adding any more to this story? It had a really interesting premise and I liked the characterization at the beginning of the story. |
| contrarymotion 2006-11-14 ch 3, | abuseWhoa. Intresting. Am very curious to know where you are going with this! |
| stareagle 2006-11-12 ch 3, | abuseSuch a bad move on Grissom's part- please don't make him dumb- He has integrity and will have to find the way to tell Sara if he hasn't already. This is not your every day secret but Sara should know. I hope when Gil sits down to have coffee with her- he explains that he has a family and she is not to contact him because of the case. I look forward to the next chapter. |
| stareagle 2006-11-12 ch 2, | abuseWell that line was a surprise! But really - how could they not have known Grissom was married once upon a time. It would have to have shown up on background checks. I haven't seen many government forms that don't ask for that kind of information. So this is going to be interesting. In the meantime, I am sure Sara will have a few things to say about this if she doesn't know. And did his mother know? I enjoy your stories. It has been a while since you updated this, so I hope you will continue some day. |
| StarlaMarie 2006-11-11 ch 2, | abuseI hope there will be an update soon :o) I am oh so curious and craving more GSR! |