I absolutely adore the ending, but I found a few things in the fic that were a little strange. For example, "Domeki lost his soul, watari saved a little girl, Himawari-chan laughed". Who's 'watari'?

"Domeki remained mysterious, impassive, and gave his eye for Domeki in a gesture of kindness and kinship unknown to him." In between 'and' and 'gave' should be 'Watanuki', right?

"Eat, drink, sleep, faun over Himawari-chan". It's 'fawn', I believe.

Other than those, the fic had a really, really nice concept! Like I said, I really loved the ending. =D

W00TNESS! It was more of a ficlet than a drabble but what the Hell. (shrugs) And tere is one spelling error and a few spacing issues. What I liked most...was the last line. Who COULDN'T? (melts over the fluffy WataMeki-ness) Ja, I loved Wata-Chan's thoughts. So amusing!

Well, on another note, I was going to be the first reviewer for this story. I recieved a lovely e-mail compliments of the fanfictionbot and came to review when the site went all stupid on me and said there was no story. So now I return a few days afterwards to read and review.

Adn now that I ahve been justified, Ciao!

~B.T.A. Ria-Chan wants her own coin-operated boy

Alana: O I like how this one was done! good job =)

Evo: meh