Awkward, sweet, and most of all, real. You perfectly portrayed them as fumbling and insecure like most people really are.

This Story made me smile. I'm still a teenager and I understand these teens so well. Loved the awkwardness I could see this happening! Great job!

Okay, the thing is, I pretty much hate Ron/Hermione fics, probably because they are so predictable.
But this kind of surprised me, and as much as I hate to admit it, I really liked it. It was so...real, I guess.
:)

It was an awkward fumbling story about things that aren't so picture perfect and always "right time, right words, right place."

I loved it.

I love this. It's so much better than those fics where Ron magically knows exactly what to do just because he's gotten advice or Hermione knows because she's read about it. And I love love love that you used that particular poem. E.E. Cummings is one of the best poets of all time, and NO ONE uses his poetry. 'cept you. Good work!

Awesome!! I love it! Keep up the good work!

i stumbled upon your story by accident & am so glad i did. i really like this because first of all, it was a nice departure from fics where hermione has "curves in all the right places" and ron has "quidditch-toned muscles." i like your realistic portrayal of what a regular teenager thinks of their body. also like that you didn't get overly graphic with the love scene.


all around, good job =)

This was beautiful and sweet! I love it!

Insecurities suck. I think you did a really good job with that and the people who have read this and not reviewed are just too insecure themselves. I liked it anyway x x x