Its interesting how anubis has insecurites, and thoughts especially while he trying to sleep at night. But he made his choice, however his past came back to haunt him. You did a good job in dialoge, and the protrayal of the atmosphere fit the one in the anime. Good job.

As always Izzy, you give us something to think about. I can understand Anubis anger at Cale threating Mia and Yuli. But, in the end, it was the strength of the Ronins, along with Mia and Yuli, that gave Anubis the ability, to save Kayura, even if it cost him his life.