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doomedberserker
2009-04-13 . chapter 3
good story can't wait to see what happens
angel61991
2009-03-24 . chapter 3
u should really update this story. i hate cliff hangers & u just left off at a pretty steep 1. so please update the story.
DeltaKyuubi
2008-07-19 . chapter 3
cool story cant wait till you update
Sora Moto
2007-12-20 . chapter 3
Encore! Encore! Please update soon.
chava
2007-09-26 . chapter 3
this is a good story. hope you can continue it again so time in the future. i think you have the ages are wrong. i think goku is 25 when he dies the first time. from what i can remember goku fights his first tournament at age 12 and the tournament continues ever 4yrs. at age 12 goku fight roshi, 16 tienshinhan, 20 piccolo, then 5yrs past and raddizt shows up. on the power levels between ranma and goku, i think your make ranma a bit more than he should but hey your the author. goku has had stronger enemies and was able to train longer and harder then ranma. ranma his good amount of enemies to. on power level you could have probably start with goku, piccolo, tien then ranma or ranm then tien. just to start think off. later in the story you could goku and ranma some what equal so then can have a friendly rivalry to get stronger.
Taeniaea
2007-09-04 . chapter 3
Great Story!!
Nysk
2007-04-16 . chapter 2
Good story, shame it has not been continued.
Blackdex
2006-12-06 . chapter 3
Personally, I think you should differentiate their abilities a little, have Goku be tougher and stronger, with more force behind his Ki, but give Ranma Greater speed and finesse, as well as excellent Ki control and a more adaptive, but less potent fighting style. In essence, a more balanced Ranma-Ryouga relationship. Well, keep it up, Ciao
HolyKnight5
2006-09-26 . chapter 3
hmm...it will be interesting...
SSJ4Sora
2006-09-22 . chapter 3
cool
Gelionlegends
2006-09-21 . chapter 3
so ranma is like brolly in a way but not the same level of power increase that he goes through?

hmm so is ranma going to be doing the same as goku did in the origanl time line as going through the same training exercises or is he going to do different ones as he already adapted to the gravity.
ho will ranma and goku get back to earth plus will akane be brought back as well?
i hope ranmas dna hasn't been taken now or later by dr gero would make things harder for the fighters if he did.

ranma/18/kasumi/hinako one or all those pairings for ranma, i have only seen one ranma and 18 but the story needs to be continued.
Nysk
2006-09-20 . chapter 3
EPP, AKANE!!

Good chapter
Lykii
2006-09-20 . chapter 3
Very good, but although Akane has matured over the time she's been training with King Cai, I wouldn't expect her first reaction to seeing Ranma would be a big smile and, "Hi Ranma. Long time no see."
Please Update
2006-09-19 . chapter 3
Unless you changed the history Ranma a lot, he did not save the world. BTW Ranma's power level(even if he trained a lot) will at most be at Krillian's level. The training Goku went through is lot tougher than Ranma ever did.
Tatsu-ZZmage
2006-09-19 . chapter 3
9/10 can't think of anything worth saying other then good job cant wait to see more.
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