|Reviews for Just Persuasion|
| silveroaks 5/11/13 . chapter 1
wow... it was really emotional toward the end. great job!
| Daevanam Daevo 5/3/13 . chapter 1
Holy shit this was great! This was so well written and the characterization was brilliant! Thank you for this!
| Guest 4/25/13 . chapter 1
everyone is begging for you to write more so please do so! its so well thought out and so realistic! this is the sasuke i want sakura to end up with youve made this real and im addicted so please write more!
| Guest 3/26/13 . chapter 1
this was just mind-blowing. The idea is so unique and you have written it quite well. it would be amazing to have like a second chapter to this...for example maybe sasuke returns to konoha...or something. please dont leave it at just a oneshot. this can be so much more
| K 3/21/13 . chapter 1
| xXMariahDawnXx 3/16/13 . chapter 1
This is my favorite SasukexSakura fanfic of all time! Number one! Because I'm all about realism. And this is extremely realistic in every aspect. I love this so much I've read it 3 times.
This is the first request I've ever asked of someone. But, could you do a similar SasukexSakura or like a continuation of this with more chapters?
| kaykaycookie8D 3/9/13 . chapter 1
To be honest... I didn't want to read this. I'm not a big fan of SasuXSaku angst one shots. I don't know why, but they scare the hell out of me. And this story so proved my point... at first.
I stopped reading the first two times I read this, too scared to find out what happens after Sasuke removes her skirt. Call me an idiot, call me weak, call me delusional, I don't care, but I just can't read stories where Sasuke is a douche bag. And he was a MAJOR douche bag... at first.
But as corny as it sounds, the third time really is the charm. I came back, refusing to leave until I finished reading this angst and I'm really glad I did. Because this one-shot is the best realistic and in depth one-shot I have ever read.
I really, really enjoyed this story, even if it took me three tries to read it all. I can't tell you how unbelievably amazing it was. You really captured and stayed true to both of the characters. The ending was bittersweet and it left me wanting more.
Haha, I can't believe I'm saying this, but it would be awesome if Kishi used this in the manga! I think it would go along with the story line and leave SasuXSaku fans content for a while. Although, I think it'd be too mature and serious for his taste. But hey, I came around, so maybe he would too as well, ne?
I'm sorry about this long review, but I hope you like it and think it's useful. I know a lot of other reviewers leave some reply about how they didn't like this story and why and I hope this gives them insight to it. Because it really was a phenomenal and excellently written story and anyone who doesn't finish reading it, like me, should come back and give it a second chance. And if they can't read it a second time, come back again. ;)
Anyways, again, sorry about the long review. I really enjoyed your story and will definitely be adding it to my favorites. Can't wait to read more from you.
| white lilies 3/5/13 . chapter 1
amazing piece. you know, this could have turned out to be some (of the many) tasteless, crappy, sasusaku lemon (which is what i was expecting lol, i've read so much crap in this fandom ugh) but wow, you are a brilliant writer. it's so well written and realistic. definitely some of the best sasusaku i've ever read.
i've also read your other stories Duty before honor and The window, also amazing fics.
and i see you like kakasaku, i wish you wrote more sasusaku though. because, sure, there's plenty of sasusaku fics around but it's so damn difficult to find a more or less well written sasusaku fic, and then even the ones that doesn't suck are just plain cliché and predictable. i bet you could write an awesome sasusaku piece (you know, like this one except multi-chapter) if you put your mind to it. but oh well, i'll take what i can get. i've read this like 7 times already lol :)
| springleaf15 3/4/13 . chapter 1
oh god this made me cry. Oh my god, you are such a talented writer.
| Laniol 2/25/13 . chapter 1
| Amanthya 1/22/13 . chapter 1
I can't remember if I ever reviewed this, but just in case I didn't or did and forgot to say - if you ever decide to continue this, I'd be extremely interested in seeing what happens next, whether she's pregnant or not.
| Cotton and Cash 12/31/12 . chapter 1
*cries because this story will always be one of my very favorite*
| Aredhiel 12/26/12 . chapter 1
I like to have words to express how great is this fic.
It's canon. I have loved, and I can promise you one SasuSaku has never been my favorite.
But your fic is simply brilliant, so it is impossible not to add it.
If you can write more of this couple, do ... I feel I can worship if I run into more of these types of fics.
PD. Sorry if my English is not so good.
| Hevith de Zar 11/15/12 . chapter 1
Maybe, Sasuke and Sakura have no opportunity, or even maybe he never will return his feelings, because your mind is busy with other matters and the pain in his heart has stopped paying attention to other emotions, but if anything is clear is that Sasuke would never allow anyone near him in such an intimate way as allowed by Sakura. Well, despite everything, he knows that her feelings for him are sincere and that's why it feels so much gratitude towards her.
It really has been painful, but it was beautiful while it is impossible to leave with a bad taste in my mouth. Maybe that's why they say that the heart of a woman is a chest of secrets.
| Guest 11/8/12 . chapter 1
This was good writing, but ugh, i felt a little sick reading it. Sorry. Not about the sex or anything, just Sasuke's attitude towards her, and Sakura's total lack of any respect for herself. When he told her to suck his cock, I honestly hated him. And her, for actually doing it. For coming up with the whole thing in the first place. But I guess this is way more realistic than what I actually want to happen. Anyway, good job, I just felt like slapping both of them through it.