Well, I guess this story's been abandoned considering it hasn't been updated in three years. Such a pity: I've been hooked on it from the first chapter! As for Hojo as a constantly bad character, I read a fanfiction a while ago where he wasn't actually so bad. Basically Vincent, instead of confronting Hojo and being killed, stayed within the program and thus became a father influence on Sephiroth. In that story, Lucrecia was more of a 'bad-guy' than Hojo: Hojo was actually quite a benign influence beyond the human scientist aspect.

O.O

"Aahhh! Cloud!" *beats Matthews sensless with pen, bar of soap, and mini-version of Masamune* "Don't you EVER touch Cloudy again. Oh wait, you're dead. Nevermind..."

All in all very charming an endearing. I was hooked from the start and I am looking forward to read the future chapters. :)

Spiders? big, giant spiders! did it have to be spiders? the stuff my nightmares are made of.

good story though, i always like it when fanfic implies cloud is cetra descendant.

i have noticed there is a distinct lack of females characters but other than that i think the story is very well written.

This a very intriguing story, I like the way you have written each character honestly-

mmmmmm this is a very interesting story i cant wait to read more please update soon

Great job:)

Please don't give up on this story D':

It's so amazing!

KYAAAAA! THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST FANFIC I EVER READ! XDDDD You are so talented! so amazing! so... so... woah!

But it's been two years since your last update, huh? It's kind of sad that you won't continue this amazing fanfic... but, oh well, everyone have their own life. Still it'll be great if you continue this

Anyway, thanks a lot for writing this! You're so talented

amazing story hun...its going great...

i was just hoping cloud wud survive the fall..since seph has a wing ..n he cn fly...he cud hav jus spread his wing n dived into the hollow n grabbed hold of cloud...wud have been soooo romantic... *giggles*

but this is okay too..i mean i just started reading the chap...will review for the rest after i finish it..

you surely do have talent but

lol you messed it up.

i love the story plot it is really realistic and has enoght fantasy in it. it is going slowly and is fully explaining the reasons like that mako poisoning time (althoght i wonder where the hell did you get that info ?) it is sweet and really adorable i like the way you described lonliness (because of my weird kind of thinking i am a real lonely person and everyone avoids me .enough of self pitty now ) i suspect you had been lonly too or you have readed many books i like to talk to you more my id is if you liked to chat i will defenetly be real glad .if i am alowwed to say i like to know your opinion on the story i have written (and hopefully gonna write) and tell me my weak points thank you very much . (love ya and the way ya think).and i really hope you update the story soon i am burning to know the rest.

p.s:is it a group writing this story? because its style changes somehow in some chapters like chap 5

i love this story so much, please update soon or i might go bat shit crazy xD

Hi... I'm wondering if you're going to update this story again? I enjoy this fiction, and would hate to see it die... your fic is definitely one of the few well-written fics out there! Thanks.

Wow! Poor Cloud.. For your first fic this is really good. When I started reading this I saw that is hasn't been updated sence January 2009 but I figured I would read till the last posted chapter at least. So here I go onto the next chapter.