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Mrs. JHalpert
2008-06-03 . chapter 2
Here's one way to go: Indiana keeps catching his dad and Lenny in what he thinks are acts of passion, but are really just some bad coincidences and funny misunderstandings. Funny for us, not so funny for Indy. That would be great!
I really hope that you update this story because I think it's really good. :)
hpjedi1
2007-12-27 . chapter 2
Hey! I really like your Indy trilogy so far. I've never read any Indy fics before so this was a great one to start on. I've never even really thought that anyone wrote Indiana Jones stories so I was surrprised. But your's is really good. I don't have any suggestions as to where you should go from your stopping point in "Secrets" but if I come up with anything I'll let you know^_^ Keep up the great writing and I hope you can climb over that metephoric brick wall soon,
~hpjedi1
Writer's Block Artist
2006-10-25 . chapter 1
UPDATE! Please? I really like the way this is so far, and if it's a oneshot, kool.
Jas-TheMaddTexan
2006-09-06 . chapter 1
ver funny. You should... no we're cool. There is nothing to speak on. Keep up the good work.
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