That was such an incredibly happy piece. I absolutely loved it. Thanks a lot for the family tree- the genealogies were confusing. I especially loved naming the baby Azula, and that you wrote so much about the children bending- it fascinated me.

I liked the style a lot. The story gave me warm fuzzies, too.

it wasn't as bad as you said it was! Haha I guess you are you're worst critic. Anyways I thought the story was kinda sweet. It was like a timeline and hahah it was interesting how Ty Lee's kids turned out to be. I liked it =)

this is so, so awesome...you have really gotten me into ty Lokka.

I LOVED IT!! i thought it would be weird b/c it had Ty Lee Zhao but it was so good

First off, I absolutely LOVE your writing style. It's so crisp and refreshing, plus this story is adorable to boot. Excellent job on your part dude. :P Keep it up!

Man! That just gave me the fuzzies! *huggles* I loved the way you wrote this! Exspecially the ending line "My aura has never been pinker." That totally summed it up. Great plot! Loved it!

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oh, ilove this story. It is so good. I LOVE IT!

wowzies! that was an awesome story! :D I really liked it! Good job! :)

I absolutely loved reading this!

being harsh to this is like trying to teach an airbender to firebend. you can't do it. Kudos on the confusing time lines and family trees. you really need more of these.

I really like the plot of the story! Zhoa and Ty Lee-- I never would have thought of it.

As far as criticism goes: I would have to say that the writing is very stiff. It's the the style of writing that you could find in a children's book.

Example:
The sky was blue. The sun was out. John and Skip went outside to play. They played for a long time.

The sentences, although not fragments, are too short. Try adding some adjectives, and try joinging some of the sentences together.

Example:
The sky was blue, and with the sun out, John and Skip decided that they'd go out to play. They played until the sun went down.

See the difference? :D

Another thing: "condescending" is used in the wrong contest in your Author's Note. "Condescending" means "to feel more superior than others" (AKA "stuck up").

Perhaps you mean "harsh" or "honest"?

Wow. I loved this piece. The style of writing you used was muy excellante, and I loved the confusing family tree. It's so cool how you made Ty Lee have so many children and grandchildren, and have all of them bend different elements (for the exception of airbending).

The last line was amazing, and fit right in...the more I think about this story, the more I like it.

Awesome work. ^^: Fav'd from me...once I sign in.

Condescending? I can't be, it was very good. I wasn't even confused by all of the children and time jumps. You explained it all very well.

I like that Heron is the firebender and Zalhire is the earthbender. That's cute. ^-^