A great story. Very good.

Yeah! I knew that Luke and Leia were Obi-Wan's! I KNEW it. mehehehe..."mine is an evil laugh!"
good story, I think you captured Padme pretty well.

OMG!! OMG!! Oh, Padme, this one is a masterpiece! I love it. It's simply AMAZING!!
Keep up with your Obidala writing. :)

That's beautiful! Wonderful writing style, too.

Interesting read..

Enjoyed it. :)