Cute fic :) It is a plausible start for a relationship, but it would be a relationship that would take a bit of work lol!

haha yes, definitely plausible. very cute and funny!

It's a cute story! :D But um, you got the characters wrong. It should be Lily Evans P. but not Lily Luna P. Lily Luna P. is Harry's daughter..

I think this is a very plausible start of James and Lily's relationship. It's an excellent reason for her to be resentful and wary in later years, if he's played her for laughs earlier on. Lily always seems like the type to hold a grudge.

Oh what a sweet story! :D

Lily must have loved that cat so much to just kiss James like that!
I mean i love my pet too but i wouldn't kiss someone over it, i think? I don't know, all well!
I loved this chapter/story, it was so funny!
It is now in my favorites!

Hate it

that was so cute! =)

So cute and such a 13 year old boy thing to do!

!! THat was a great short. It was cute and not overly cliched. Very nice indeed.

hehe... it is really cute! keep up with the great work! please update i am my own knight too! :D

I loved this one-shot. It's really good and has potential to go on as a full story.

You know what? You must be brilliant. This was fantastic! Such a wonderful read, makes me smile, go all warm inside, and just feel at peace with the world.

Oh, I liked it much! Such a nice idea! And really it seems like a plausible start for Lily and James' relationship.

How sweet! One of the best.