  Critica 10/11/04 . chapter 11 This story is rather strange, as well as being rather unbelievable, but I do like it.
Now, don't get me wrong, but it seems a little weird that they would be able to transform into Pokemon and take it as well as they did.
And ... well ... I'm not called 'Critica' for nothing.
Yours,
Critica,
Mistress of Criticism,
Unbeliever Extraordinaire. |
 Blueraven64 4/15/03 . chapter 7erm...this can't be good... |
| Blueraven64 4/15/03 . chapter 4 Hm...this is getting interesting now |
| Blueraven64 4/15/03 . chapter 1 US MILITARY? Oh boy they're in trouble... |
| Ken 9/8/02 . chapter 9 I LOVE THIS STORY! please post the next chapter soon. |
| pen dragon 4/23/02 . chapter 11 cool. |
| null-defunct 4/23/02 . chapter 11 It's excelenct to you see your back at the writing.
Keep it up, it's really good. |
| Dark Jedi Princess 4/22/02 . chapter 11 EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
YES! *calms down* Ok, will get started on it right away! Chapter 13 of my fic is comin' right up! Until then, see ya!
-Kat a.k.a. Dark Jedi Princess a.k.a. Mewtwo23 |
| Dark Jedi Princess 3/28/02 . chapter 7 he he...I was once again re-reading this. No,I still haven't come up with anything, and Mom took away my i-net access(she can be a mean-ass ***** sometimes), so I've been unable to chat.
Anywho, I am kinda running outta stuff to say. Just one more thing, though.
I am working on a Pokémorphs story(as you no doubt know) and I would kinda appreciate it if you would... please, read it? For me? Anywho, if you want, I may be able to fit you and your Pokémorphs gang in there(sorta like a combo story, no?) Anywho, please, read it(and review, naturally), and tell me if you want to be in it.
See ya!
lylas,
Dark Jedi Princess, a.k.a. Kat |
| Teacher's Pet 3/5/02 . chapter 2 You made a slight calculation error.If they were at the Statue of Liberty, then since they transformed at night... they would be stuck right? Also, you make everything seem so casual like it was an everyday event trasforming into cartoon characters, meeting people from the Internet, fighting your country's army...
But I really like your idea:)
- The Boston Globe (kidding)
(ain't I annoying?) |
| Teacher's pet 3/5/02 . chapter 1 It's an OK start. But I just wanted to know, WHY THE HECK WOULD YOU MEET AT A PLACE WHERE THERE'S NORMAL PEOPLE?...
Just thought you'd like an opinion:) |
| Twilight The Umbreon 3/2/02 . chapter 10 Hmmm..I think i like it! |
| Taora 2/28/02 . chapter 10 I wish I can be in this!It's great!Please comtact me at if I can or not! |
| nightdragon0 2/27/02 . chapter 10 Cool, this story's going pretty nicely. |
| Dark Jedi Princess 2/27/02 . chapter 10 FINALLY! Another chapter! I like the "Twogia" thing... Man, I wish I could be in this... Uh, not tyring to suggest anything there!
Hurry up and write more! |
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