 Kitten Kisses 3/2/12 . chapter 1Glad Emmeline got mentioned! Though I admit the very end of this is just really sad. :( |
 Calyndra 10/22/07 . chapter 1Oh, angst bomb...
Every time I ask myself why Remus had to go a be a bloody Noble Prat and every time I'm equally angry at him.
Nothing on your writing, of course. You did quite well, as usual.
The Celestina stiptease promises to be... interesting. Wow.
Caly |
 the-original-hufflepuff 10/4/07 . chapter 1Yay for Remus stripteases!
Sweet fic, angsty beginning and sexy end. How awesome xD. |
 No Name Face 6/22/07 . chapter 1 I love how you've portrayed their relationship, it's beautiful. The tension inherent in the last few sentences of this piece was fully tangible. Awesome. |
 Taela 10/2/06 . chapter 1Aww, that was a lovely, sweet story. You scared me at the beginning there, though. Not explaining at first who the 'she' was who had died. Because one automatically links Tonks with Remus. But it was good. Short and sweet. |
 Mrs Pierre Bouvier 9/11/06 . chapter 1Wonderful story! And only a strip tease...damn. |
 Gilpin 9/6/06 . chapter 1I liked the smooth changes in mood when I read this originally, and it's just as good on a re-read. It's such a barely noticeable transition from the start where he feels useless, to a haven where there's humour and he's safe, to the end where there's forboding of what is to come and the reader appreciates how hopeless and useless he will feel again. Lovely rhythm throughout. Anyone ever said there's a poetic quality to your writing?
And Tonks seducing Remus to Celestina? Obviously the Weird Sisters don't write lyrics about cauldron stirring. ;) |
 Bratanimus 9/6/06 . chapter 1Lovely story. It's nice to be reminded that a war is going on, that the stakes are getting higher as more and more people are killed. The first section was quite moving, and the reader can sense how powerless Remus feels. Then there's a nice transition to his safe harbor, the place where he can smile, and the person with whom he actually feels like smiling. And even though there are undercurrents of the war throughout this story, the last line was still surprising and a shock. Well done! |
 Bardlover 9/4/06 . chapter 1Fantastic! Wonderful! Sequel? |
 MrsTater 9/4/06 . chapter 1Lovely images, from start to finish, culminating with the highly amusing one of Remus stripping to A Cauldron Full of Hot, Strong Love. Because we all know it's one great innuendo. |
 Moonlitesadness 9/4/06 . chapter 1This was really good. It was sorta sad that that was their last night. You should maybe do a sequel? Well good job and God Bless. |