|Reviews for Ranma ½ Happily Ever After|
| gort420 4/7/13 . chapter 75
good fic it's comfortable, too comfortable sometimes. You need to shake things up, your on the verge of becoming booring.
| James Birdsong 4/1/13 . chapter 75
Pretty cool fanfic. Very great.
| AiydanWarrior 4/1/13 . chapter 75
Yay you updated! I have been looking forward to this story being updated and like your other chapters it didn't disappoint me. :) I love the detail you did for the competation and the fact that most of the team is doing better because of the naked runs lol I do love how mature the characters are becoming as this story progresses, especially Akane and Ranma.
Update soon! :)
| maxridelover 3/31/13 . chapter 75
glad to read more from this story, and I enjoyed the gyamnastics events!
| Y2Ranma 3/12/13 . chapter 74
When Miyuki & Akane are talking to the coach about Ranma becoming the assistant coach you say that he's picked up the basic, does Akane's floor routine & could do the balance beam but you don't say
The following is said by Akane
"Don't forget that before the curse was known Ranma filled in for me filling in for the then current gymnastic team in the match againest the Black Rose & St._'s gymnastic team"
| Guest 3/9/13 . chapter 63
one of the girls in class who had spent at least ten minutes "expounding" on how well she had done on the practice
Shouldn't that be ... explaining?
| Guest 3/8/13 . chapter 57
I love the Miyuki & Hikari pairing tease I know there's about another 17 chapters before I'm upto date but right now I'm kind of hopping for them to be together
| Guest 3/7/13 . chapter 56
I think you forgot this piece in between (_) in the following
"She told everyone that anyone who caught you during the run could have sex with you."
"The funny thing was, the one girl who was racing hardest to catch you (aside from myself) was Miyuki."
| Guest 3/5/13 . chapter 34
Last time they went to a festival it was the _ festival back when Cologne used the Cats Tougne Pressure Point locking Ranm
| Guest 3/2/13 . chapter 24
Akane smiled. "I don't think you're a weirdo. I'm marrying the weirdo."
"Hey!" Ranma said then shot back "I don't think Nabiki would happy with you marrying her boyfriend"
| Guest 3/1/13 . chapter 17
Should have been
"I wouldn't think of it, I remember what she tried putting me in after that see through nightie, back when Cologne locked me" Ranma said with a big smile. "Nabiki's underwear is just too scary."
| Y2Ranma 3/1/13 . chapter 15
Instead of just sending a letter with her already being there when Nodoka comes to the dojo Ranma should have had been acting like he did in "Am I Pretty...Ranma's Declaration of Womanhood" (Ranma 1/2:Hard Battle) if you do know Ranma/Ranko acted like Kasumi
| Guest 2/28/13 . chapter 14
When Ranma tells Akane about the dream… no nightmare… no night terror, he had. You should add "Possible warning...preminuaition"
When he says "I know it was just a dream but suddenly I realized all this time anything I have tried to find a way to rid myself of this curse, or anytime I might have come in contact with water from Jusenkyou, something has happened to prevent it. Some little twist of fate has stopped it. Akane, I don't think it is meant for this curse to be removed. I will just have to live with it."
Should have added "What if the reason I've never gotten cured is because like in my nightmare getting cured means death"
| Ranmamania 2/28/13 . chapter 13
When Nabiki apologizes after Akane's half truth of what happened instead of "Your right. It didn't really matter what happened" she should have said "Your right. But with all the times you have called Ranma a pervert it's hard to believe nothing happened"
| Guest 2/28/13 . chapter 11
It was the sound of Ranma's stomach that caught both Ukyo and Shampoo's attention. "Ranma, do you really think it was smart to do that this morning?" Akane asked. "It accomplished what I need to have accomplished. I don't think the old man is going to bother any of us for a very long time." Ukyo looked at both Akane and Ranma and asked
"What happened this morning?"
"Ranma challenged Happosai this morning," Akane answered.
"And Ranma here to tell about it," Shampoo said.
"What!" Ukyo said in utter shock. "What kind of a challenge was it?"
I think this could have come next
Ranma got up exscueing himself moments later as Akane explained what had happened they heard glass shatter they looked at where the sound came from as a guy ran to the pool from where he landed
"MY NOSE IT BURNS!"
"Isn't that the guys bathroom window?" Ukyo asked as a sheepish Ranma came upto them in time to hear a nearby Hiroshi say he had to go to the bathroom & excused himself only for Ranma to say
"DO NOT GO IN THERE"