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The Oceanographer
2008-12-22 . chapter 1
Wonderful! Very touching (for me at least). But here are a few things you need to change:
It's Fire Lord Sozin, not Firelord Souzen,
And Aang shaves his head every day. I learned this from "Tales From Ba Sing Se."
Overall, I think that you are a great writer.
kathir
2008-11-18 . chapter 8
Great that youre writing about Kyoshi.Keep on writing and the rewiews will be pouring in.
clockworkchaos
2008-08-18 . chapter 7
I love the drabbles here, it's a wonderful collection of interesting and intriguing oneshots.
clockworkchaos
2008-08-18 . chapter 8
Isn't your end message forcing something down my throat?

If I think there is an objective standard of right and wrong, who are you to force your message of relativism down my throat? Arn't you doing the very thing you just decried about Mulan II?
Zayda Dei
2007-11-18 . chapter 3
i love the last one. it's so simple, and yet amazing. i also like the fact that it's left open, and therefore could apply to more than one character [though i'm assuming it was geared toward aang ...?]
GuardianXAngel
2007-11-14 . chapter 8
Please do write about Avatar Kyoshi again. I'm tired of reading the hundreds of stories about Avatar Aang. oh yeah, good chapter. I like how you personified her past lives and the setting. Nice. Please update soon.
knittingpanda
2007-05-30 . chapter 5
oh yeah, I was about to say that the name souinded familiar.
knittingpanda
2007-05-30 . chapter 4
I'm guessing that guy said something about Azula that wasn't nice. Il ike this one.
knittingpanda
2007-05-30 . chapter 3
I like "Moon" and "Waves"
irohsteashoppegirls
2007-04-04 . chapter 8
Nice Collection of shorts. I enjoyed the Culture Clash chapter the most. I love reading about minor and past avatars. Continue soon.
knittingpanda
2007-03-19 . chapter 8
cute! I liked all of them.
knittingpanda
2007-03-19 . chapter 1
is "Mary's lullaby" the song that goes

"lullaby,lullaby, my little one, lullaby, my child so dear"?

my sister and I sang a duet of that at christmas once...
MonCappy
2007-01-09 . chapter 4
Heh. I liked the bit at the end. I found it amusing that he would punch the guy for talking about Zuko's sister.
who wants that knowledge
2006-12-23 . chapter 3
I just wanted to say that the sentence about Toph and Zuko staring into the sun was *awesome*.
Beloved-Stranger
2006-12-21 . chapter 8
This is my fave mindbender so far. I love the balance of it, how she realizes it's not her place to bring about a change...and how she can interact with her predecessors - my whole 'spirit-admiration-o-meter' is off the scale..who!

And you are so sneaky, putting a cliffhanger on the RP. Its been four days! I'm going mildly nuts because its only the others who can reply (logically).

(Sigh) Anyway, love it love it, I'm so keeping an eye on you for more Kyoshi.

Cheers (and hurrah),
Stranger.
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