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marajaderox1280
2009-05-26 . chapter 1
Wow. I really liked it! My favorite was Jandon and Mon Motha in the elevator!! Please keep posting your miricales called stories!
The-Solo-Smirk
2009-04-22 . chapter 1
I am H&L biased, so the last one's my fav...but Janson & Mothma?! -> hilarious!

This collection screams "perfection!"...so if LASOS is pleading for you to come back, I'll join her!
LASOS
2008-08-30 . chapter 1
Dear Limelight,

I got a livejournal to write you this letter on your page, but I don't know how to use it so I'm writing you here.

I love this story. I don't know why more writers don't do H/L five things, but you've inspired me to write one as well. I love the line 'she laughs, but it sounds like she is crying.' (Or something to that effect.) And what's more, I love your writing. I've spent a fair amount of time procrastinating, at work no less, by reading and rereading your stories. They're fantastic. They're funny and sad and brilliant. I love your Han/Leia. I love your Mothma/Janson, and I don't even like couples other than Han and Leia. (I also love your Jim and Pam, but that's beside the point.) I love your Rieekan and I love the way he interacts with Dodonna.

This is an open letter to you, LL, for everyone on to read if they so choose to read the reviews of your (incredible) stories. PLEASE come back! PLEASE write more! This site is, dare I say it, so severely lacking without more of your work.

Pretty please?

Sincerely (or perhaps, desperately),

-LASOS
:)
2008-02-21 . chapter 1
1) who says he would be more respectable? & I can totally hear the music swell

3) love the fluff, writing style, & ending (height difference)

5) nice.
TheMuleteer
2007-07-15 . chapter 1
Huh. Didn't exactly see the whole Mothma-Janson bit coming, but you did catch his character perfectly--especially with the 'lobbing-bits-of-bread-at-lights' segment, there. LOVED the segments with Han and Leia, though, especially the last; have to admit, the first time I saw the movie, I half-expected her to actually say that to him. Keep up the good work.
Phillippa of the Phoenix
2006-10-30 . chapter 1
You've converted me. I am now a shipper of Mon/Janson.
Wee mistake in The Supreme Commander: she "roles" up her sleeves.
But your writing is impeccable and emotional. It leaves the back of my mouth a titch dryer than usual, especially the things you DON'T say.
The dressing room scene was LOVE! And the way you use parenthesis is magic.
Your newest fan,
Phillie
Dr. Tamwe
2006-09-29 . chapter 1
I really like this, but I have a hard time following the transitions at some parts. With all the pronouns, I lose track of which character is being spoken about. However, I really like your prose and I love the Mon Mothma/Janson pairing. It's so original, and just oddball enough to be both believable and cute :)
classicreviewer
2006-09-15 . chapter 1
me love. me love MUCHIE.

sorry. sinus infection. i'm typing this using one eye to check the keys, the other being too busy rolling into the back of my head in pain.
KnightedRogue
2006-09-08 . chapter 1
Yeah, I've always wondered why no one has really ever done the "__ things that never happened" fic with Han and Leia. Waiting for you, I guess. :)

This is also marvelous. I love/love/love the first vignette at the rebel base. Simply fabulous. It would have been fun that way. *sigh*

The dressing room piece made me laugh out loud, which is bad, because I'm in the Student Life building and there's a tour starting and the first thing these up-and-coming college freshmen need is a senior sitting with her laptop cracking herself up over fanfic. :) But that's okay. They'll just be inducted into the underworld of geekiness in this university earlier that normal.

Oh, and I love Monsan. Or Jathma. I can't decide which stupid celebrity couple name to give them. I'm kinda liking Jathma, personally.

Again, beautiful. Never fail to impress, do you?

KR
LeiaMichaela
2006-09-06 . chapter 1
Oh I really loved this one. I think my favorite is the one where Leia tries on the dress. I mean, just the image of Leia standing on a stool to kiss Han is great. The Mon Mothma or Janson part was really funny but as a H/L lover did I more love the other ones. You're a really great writer.
dragoneyes171986
2006-09-06 . chapter 1
nice.
Jansen really is insane.
GreatOne
2006-09-06 . chapter 1
You write the BEST stories... :)
AgentRusco
2006-09-05 . chapter 1
I love your stuff.
anon
2006-09-05 . chapter 1
Yay you're writing again! Do it some more, please! (and maybe if you wanted to expand upon any or all of the H/L bits that would be exceptionally lovely)
Thanks!
Libbet
2006-09-05 . chapter 1
I love this. I particularly love the image of Leia standing on a stool, about to kiss Han, for some reason. Brilliant job with all of them.
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