 claire inashagi 2008-12-29 . chapter 1i love this so much, and i think your right, it's a better solution, and besides.
subaru really needs stabillity in his life, and seishiro was the only one (apart from hokuto) whom he trusted |
 Dark Coco 2008-09-28 . chapter 1Well written! Beautiful. ^_^ You described things in a really unique way, lovely. |
 Vyersdra 2008-05-16 . chapter 1I won't grumble silently, don't worry about that! I always review when I enjoyed the story, and this is it!
At the beginning, your story seemed me a simple parody with humour, but in fact, when Subaru and Seishirou met, the seriousness appeared! I gred the text until the very end! I love it very much, and usually, I don't really appreciate reading in english, but I haven't been disappointed at all! Your style pleased me a lot!
Thank you for the good time!
Hope I'll read you next time! |
 kingleby 2008-04-16 . chapter 1Seishiro in denial again! ^_^ It's great when that happens. I love this! If only Fuma really did go around fulfilling these sort of wishes. |
 krad 2007-05-03 . chapter 1 I loved this story. Very well written. =)
I was a bit confuse on what happened between Kamui and Seishiro but I think I get it now. |
 Lemonysh 2007-04-03 . chapter 1your side notes were very helpful in understanding this fic. not that you really need a basis for changing something in a fic, but it's nice that you at least tried to keep in believable. it's quite bothersome that kakyo blames Subaru as well, quite illogical too, but what can you expect from a man who lives to dream?
Overall lovely |
 Francesca Akira89 2007-01-21 . chapter 1 XD Questa è spassosa! Davvero divertente! Anche se l'arrendevolezza di Subaru al proposito di Seishiro di portarlo a vivere con lui suona un po' strana...
Qui Fuuma sembra quasi buono... O.ò; |
 Fantasia-Spirit 2006-12-06 . chapter 1Definitely one of the best Seishiro/Subaru fics I found uptil now.
Your style is really nice. It's clear you're knowledgable about the manga and delved into the characters psyche a lot before you wrote. I see this in all you're fanfics.
This is combination with good storytelling is a sure win :) |
 JenEvan 2006-11-04 . chapter 1 This is quite different from the others I've read,esp your portrayal of Seishiro.But i really like where the story is heading towards ^^ |
 0ri 2006-09-11 . chapter 1Wow, Fuuma really dissed them.
I thought this was going to end really badly/sadly considering how it's labeled as angst...
But, I liked the ending. It was really sweet how he pushed them together. Though I immensely doubt Fuuma's capable of pushing Seishirou around or influencing him (my own opinion, seeing as how he completely ignored Fuuma's advice when he told him that he was wrong in his assumption of Subaru's true wish) not my idea, but, I liked it, nevertheless... Subaru's was so cute at the end. |
 yumemi 2006-09-09 . chapter 1 *Gaping...wonder-fanta-listic-bloody-ful! *swoon... totally wished this is what happened in X (but we know Clamp would never do that...cos they're evil...)
*look around for a wish-granting-Kamui-genie .>
pause: "you're getting fat and your hair is getting grey and you're starting to have wrinkles" totally cracked me up!! :D
ouch! my imagination is running overdrive -despite my trying not to- trying imagine Seishirou looking like that.. wait...NO!! ugh! *proceed to wash my brain out... T_T
great fic! |
 Sessho 2006-09-08 . chapter 1 Recently I noticed that a lot of fics that I like or even adore are your writing and this one isn't exemple too :] I really like the way that you're showing here that Seishirou cares for Subaru, but he's just unaware of it. Intresting thing is also that you showed that Seishirou isn't so confident (especially when Fuuma's near and when he talk's about Wishes). Usually people don't make him like that. As for Kakyou, I always think that he rather doesn't like Subaru and blame him for Hokuto's death as well as Sakurazukamori. I like your Subaru and think that's quite suitable to him to behave this way.
And sorry if I made any error :] |
 Hatori Soma 2006-09-06 . chapter 1 awsomeness! You truely are a master at X-19 fics! Keep writing! |
 Faby 2006-09-06 . chapter 1 I started reading your fics a few days ago and I adore your writing, your stories are so well written and the characters are so believable, you do a wonderful job portraying Subaru and Seichiro. I hope you'll continue write much more. |