So good!! Please continue writing this! I love it ^^

WAH!! Yukimura, why didn't you go do Sasuke yourself! *practically pounds poor Yuki on the back while sobbing*
But...that was SWEET. Way to go Kyo! I kinda wanna see this pairing a lot more now, since it's totally hot. Wonder what Saizo and Unno might find? Will read!

Oh.
Wow.
Hmm.
*Slaps self around the face* Hell, this is good! I'm actually a YukimuraxSasuke fan, but this pairing...I hadn't expected this. Great insight! Still, Yuki being my favorite character, I have this small bit wanting him to be together with Sasu...but with KYO...I REALLY want to see this!!
I was practically jumping in my chair with that bit about Sasuke and Kyo. Give us some more detail on what happened...? :]
Keep it up! Will read!! (Sasuke is so cute...!)

Please continue!

Nice lol Hope you continue writing. Even though I'm more of a Yukimura/Sasuke fan, but its still good. Keep up the good work

Ah, it's really too bad about the grammar mistakes, because this is an interesting idea, a good story, and some nice thought about the character's personality...
If you want I can correct the grammar and send it back to you, because ti's the beggining of an awesome fic and it deserves more love, but the mistakes make it difficult to read.
I hope the crit doesn't stop you... it's still an awesome story, and I'll be waiting to read more!

Yo! Guess who decided to drop by! Wo! *runs around*

I see, a new story eh Mira? Hehheheh. And, BTW, who's kyo?

LOL.

Jinx~*

This story has such great characterization! You really have got them spot on and I can't wait to read more!!

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Update, pleaasse

Ooh...mysterious...