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RiaSternchen
2006-12-28 . chapter 3
MEAN! Q_Q
smiley's chaos
2006-10-23 . chapter 3
Update soon.:)
Haruko
2006-10-13 . chapter 3
*SNIFFLES*

oh i suspected kazuha was already dead...so as i read...sadness sorta kept doubling itself until i reached the ending

*SNIFFLE* HEIJI U IDIOT! WHY OH WHY DIDNT U LET KAZUHA KNOW HOW U FEEL ABOUT HER EARLIER?!
Jazzy Uchiha
2006-10-07 . chapter 3
it was good, the ending was sad, the omake was funny
Anonymous
2006-10-07 . chapter 2
Good job! I like this story! Although I have one question...

Isn't the one supposed to let people into heaven St. Peter?
Fyliwion
2006-10-07 . chapter 3
> Now I think I'm going to have to go cry. I kinda suspected something like that was coming but still *sniffles* Very awesome now ignore me while I going in a corner and bawl *coughs*
RanMouri82
2006-09-19 . chapter 2
Ah, the angsty answer to the question, "What if Heiji never 'gets it' and Kazuha never says anything?" It amused me to think of Heiji actually deciding to date girls instead of corpses--but poor Kazuha! The angst came off very well; Kazuha's emotions weren't overblown, just simple and numb. Kazuha's name was misspelled in the third paragraph from the bottom, but that's it. Great job! Keep writing!
Fyliwion
2006-09-18 . chapter 2
Aw *cuddles* por zuha... and you did excellent with the angst! *tsks heiji* But really like this one ^__^ Happy to see a new update!
Jazzy Uchiha
2006-09-18 . chapter 2
it was good, i feel sry for kazuha, tho
The Violent Tomboy
2006-09-18 . chapter 2
Awe, it's kinda sad. Did you see movie 7? The ending was so sweet for them...
Koneko4869
2006-09-13 . chapter 1
Nice job on the first chapter. ^_^ I can't wait to read more! Heiji x Kazuha is probably one of my favorite pairings.
Jazzy Uchiha
2006-09-06 . chapter 1
i like
RanMouri82
2006-09-06 . chapter 1
This was a great start to the 40 Nights adventure! (I'm about to begin a new round of Shin/Ran 30 Kisses!) This premise could've gone south very easily, so thanks for keeping it clean. It would seem more natural to keep the standard roles of Heiji being his usual oblivious self and Kazuha going bonkers; also, Heiji would've probably let Kazuha have the sleeping bag--unless it was his, and she forgot to pack her own. But Heiji's subtle denial at the end was priceless! It would be funny if, in a later Night, Heiji has to pay off his gambling debt by becoming Kazuha's slave for the day. Again, great start. Keep writing!
The Violent Tomboy
2006-09-06 . chapter 1
Kyuut!
Amy85
2006-09-06 . chapter 1
Hi!
here I am again! love this one also, even if it's so short!
so cute thinking of those to in a sleeping bag!!xD
well looking forward to the 39 next chapters!

please update son!

^_^Amy^_^
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