Good chapter! Actually, Marty could use the 'if it hadn't been for me, you would've never been born' thing on Calvin - so even if he wasn't the older twin now, he could still use that fact. Still, it's good.

The new chapter is good. Poor Calvin must be very concerned about Marty. Are you going to make a Trilogy verse of this story (Marty getting hit on the head by Needles throwing a ball), too?

Good chapter, Bttf 4! Poor Calvin - it's really bad that you don't exist in another world. Then again, in our world, Marty doesn't exist either, since he's just a fictional character here.

This is really good. You do well, writing about the relationship of Marty and Calvin over a period of time.

Calvin shouldn't have done that...

Do Marty and Calvin share a room?

I cried when I read this chapter.

Nice fic! Everything Marty and Calvin talked about is great advise when it comes to preparing and making a speech, especially in front of a lot of people like that. It's great if you can get a speech memorized and then while your giving it, you can always change it around a bit. I know because I took speech in college and I REALLY hated it but I had a good teacher. Well anyway, nice fic I enjoyed it.