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| Desepere Romantique 2006-09-12 ch 1,  | abuseYou capture Jayne just right in this and Slinky. I hope to read more, it was very intertaining. |
| bubbles 2006-09-05 ch 1, anon. | abusem, chocolate fire. awesome imagery. |
| Ellisguy 2006-09-05 ch 1, | abuseLaughed out loud when you mentioned Jayne's fear of River just staring at him. Makes me wonder why that would make him uncomfortable. Why doesn't he want to stare back? Hm! (hehehe) |