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| Lattelady 2006-09-29 ch 1,  | abuseMy goodness this was funny. I don't know how I missed both here and at the Rayne board. Just great. Favorite line: "Them certainly ain't kosherized rules. Grabbin' a man down there an squeezin' him like he's the last bit a toothpaste in the tube." |
| Snakeyes 2006-09-18 ch 1, | abusehehe, i like ur little jayne points of view.. you should put them all together and link em into a longer story.. that would be cool |
| Scifi-warper 2006-09-06 ch 1, | abuse*Snicker* Oh, poor Jayne *pats him on head* So clueless and yet so amusing. Cute bit with the hair that smells like violets. I like it. Is Jayne really not getting it?! |
| Ellisguy 2006-09-05 ch 1, | abuse"Maybe a brunette? With long hair that smells of violets? Where the hell did that come from?" Loved it, and didn't have to squint too hard. |