very realistic. can see this happening

I love how you portrayed Spike's POV. It was insightful. Keep up the good work. I really liked this.

GOD I love the way you write Spike. **, yeah.

Where are you?

This is so ** raw and violent and real. It's like I'm inside Spike's head when all this goes down, feeling every single thing. I can totally visualise everything that's happening like it's a clip from Goodfellas or a James Cagney movie, something dark and cool like that.

"Yeah, sure, go ahead. Like I wanna see anything like this again."

Yes! And the favourite line of the fic award goes to...

Please come back and write more. I like my Bebop fics like this - visceral and brutal and ** awesome. Interestingly enough, also the way I like my coffee, minus the sugar.

Bob5

This is great. Julia is great. Vicious is great. Even Spike is great. At first I cringed because poor dear Spike was a freaking junkie. Then I realized all the times we see Spike in the series he's pratically chasing suicide. So why wouldn't he be all into destroying his life before the series? I also like your Julia. All of the Julia's on this site seem to either be ** or homemakers. I like her as one of the guys. Albeit, a pretty nice looking guy. Anyway, great job. Thelast line did it for me. Great!

Oh. I like this fic. The words flow very easily. Write more, pretty please?

Amazing. Perfect. Not too much Julia mush, just the right balance of...everything.

Favourite author's list? I think so.

I loved this, too. It's so gritty and just plain dirty. I think I need a shower and some church. Excellent.

whoa. this was beyond intense. i'm so happy you're back! okay, sorry, i tried to reveiw for this when you posted, but the site was down. again. anyways, i absolutely love what you did with this. i remember you saying you believed Spike had past demons with drugs, but actually seeing it unfold before my eyes was incredible. you captured the whole detatched, dizzy feeling of being high and the edge i'm sure you get with Red Eye. spooky. the scenes with the doberman and the poor toddler were beyond... anything. i was real glad this was in fisrt-person especially for those two parts. ew!! and his eye! ah, that was great but terrible at the same time. i love you (totally non-romantic, you know. you just write too well!)
god, update this quick please
raider out
xoxo!

You make me want to write CB again.

Alas, wanting and doing are two different things.