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| Rose of Death 2008-07-19 ch 1,  | abusethis is interesting. I really want to know what happens next, hope you can update soon. |
| methoslover 2008-02-25 ch 1, | abuseI would like to read the next chapter. :-) |
| NATWEST 2008-02-25 ch 1, | abuseI love your story and I hope you will update soon. |
| Pan06 2008-02-24 ch 1, | abuseThis story is pretty good. I always like reading HArry SG-1 story espesially ones where Harry gets to be heroic. One's where SG-1 come in and take over and or mock the Wizarding world as a whole don't appeal. I do hope you continue. I'd get a beta reader though. A good better will not only check grammer but suggest rewording of sentences, just little things that will keep characters in charater. Some of your sentaces seemed a little forced. Some of the best beta's I've worked with have even helped out with plot suggestions if you get stuck. Sometimes just getting an outside opinion can spark some ideas of your own. If you like I can offer my services or suggest a few that I've worked with. Contact me on sarah_pan06 at hotmail . com Keep up the good work and good luck with your GSCE's. (They need to come first.) |
| Ater Phasma 2008-01-14 ch 1, | abuseWell, I'm interested. I'm really, really intrigued by an HPSG1 crossover. I admit I've considered writing one myself, more than a few times. But I'm always so lazy... maybe you can overcome my problem. :D Cheers |
| Rainbow2007 2008-01-07 ch 1, | abuseit is a good start. please update soon a love it |
| jabarber69 2008-01-07 ch 1, | abuseHey I hope you do continue this! |
| panther73110 2008-01-07 ch 1, | abusegreat story I love Stargate and Harry stories. |
| Burning LilyRose 2007-10-29 ch 1, | abuse...holy **! right now i'm so glad this is only fiction. *shuders* Voldemort with the powers of a semi-assended Anubis *shuders* you are an EVIL author to come up with that. *gives author cyber-cookies* |
| ------- 2007-03-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseGood first chapter. I hope you continue this fic - I'm looking forwards to the next chapter. Think Year 10's bad? wait till year 11. That's when teachers really put the pressure on you. Make the most of the holidays you have now. |
| :) 2007-01-15 ch 1, anon. | abusetwo words: oh **! |
| :) 2007-01-15 ch 1, anon. | abusetwo words: oh **! |
| pandas rule the world 2006-11-12 ch 1, | abuseCan't wait to see what happens next! |
| Maxennce 2006-10-30 ch 1, | abuseIt sounds like a good beginning. You are correct in saying that your english needs a little work, but that's what we're for. You've also got to take into account that your what? 15. Give it time. But if you need a hand from someone that has been reading this stuff for quite some time and is quite knowledgable in both areas that your writing about, give us a hoy. My email's on my page and you should be able to contact me any time. Even just for some plot advice. Keep up the good work, the descriptiveness of your writing is what keeps the readers interested. That's what you have to concentrate on. Setting the scene, using your words to visualise what your writing about. Cheers max |
| Theboss996 2006-10-11 ch 1, | abuseits good update soon |