Love the story! I wish there was more!

Aw...that is a really really great story!

luved It!

The wedding must be a FAKE...

Really interesting story!

David? *argh*

This marriage must be undercover! I hope...

loved it

That was one of the best bones fan fics i have read, the storyline was intense, this is the first time that i have been left with clammy palms and been on a emotions rollercoaster.

This has been very well written, i love the contrast of short sentences which create tension and long sentences which include great detail.

I like how you have been daring enough to end the story with death, its depressing but it is good to read something that doesnt end with happy ever after.

I also like how the characters personalities have been altered e.g. Booth having an affair, as we all no he is catholic and i can quote him saying "i have never cheated on anyone i have ever been with" although he is not in a relationship i would presume this applies to women in a relationship.

Overall i have nothin in mind to improve, this is probably not very helpful but i thought there was no part of this story that was irrelevant it all had a part to play which is what i like. I very much enjoyed this bones fanfic and look forward to reading more cheersx

I just read your whole story. Very sad, but at the same time, fluffy. For some reason, Booth giving her some blood was very romantic.

Aha. Now I see. Clear as mud :) lol. Good chapter.

Hmm...I'm guessing some sort of forced marriage. But I'm not sure...God damnit it's confusing :) Great job.

Ohh, intriguing...I think I'm gonna have to go all Hodgins and yell CONSPIRACY THEORY! What the hell is going on?

aw and it ends with them happy.

Aww beautiful ending. I got so worried about Tempe though. David's a sick bastard. Meh. Great ending though. BB forever :D

Amazing End to a wonderful story. It was one of the best ending's i think. Good Job

Ashley Booth

Is this the end? Say it isn't so! Oh, so, huh. Well then okay. (sniffle) The ending was a trifle abrupt but considering that the end of the previous chapter actually could have been the culmination I guess I am glad to have this little epilogue. Thanks for writing.

awesome ending!