HAHAHAHAHAHHA that was brill! even when Naruto tops he bottoms! hahahaha
lol soz did that make sense? ^^ XD

Nice!

YAY SASUNARU FOREVER well... i liked it

Loved it!^^ Sasuke Naruto smut? So hot!! Complete nosebleeds. Nice thank you for writing this!^^

Hahaha! Hilarious and aslo very seet, yummy. Dominant and submissive Naruto at the same time... That's what I' m looking for!

That was your first try?!
My God, that was fantastic. My first try at lemon was...ugh a disaster. lol.
Good Job!

HEHE he totaly past the blame to sasuke I loved it!

dat was hot! it was also really funny :) u sud rite more stories like dis

heehee

It was cute ^^ heh Naruto didn't get any food :p heh

yaoi! i like it! keep writing like that and you'll do great! as a writer.

ahh, that was hott, and good. the ending was PERFFEECTT

What are you talking about Naruto you did eat! You ate Sasuke XD
anyway yay Naruto-seme! I want more like this the smut was awesome!^^

Good smut!
I had a very good time reading it!
Hope you write more.
SasuxNaur/NaruxSasu are my otp, but I honestly don't care that much who tops as long as they are together!:) Forever!

quickies are cool!