Wow... This story's really good. I love both Alice in Wonderland/Through the Looking Glass and SSB, so this story is a treat for me, expecially with Pit in it :3 Please write more!

diden't like it starting at page 2 stoped at page 4.

I noticed you had no reviews so i thought id share some insight.

I like the idea, and how you incorporate all the characters together.

ALTHOUGH, for someone who has never read/watched Alice in Wonderland, your descriptions of what is going on is very vague. Its hard to get a picture of whats going on, making it hard to enjoy.

The characters also arent very similar to the way they act in the game, but just bodies to encompass the personalities you created for this story. Its a wierd effect.

Anyway, it's enjoyable! keep it up