BWA! They can't die! At least add in an "afterlife" scene, or a scene from a few years after with their next generation! They were so cute together!

Also, add more stuff on how their feelings for eachother grew. It was kinda sketchy. I know I"m not native to this fandom, but it was just kind of like "Oh, I love you. you love me too? Ok, let's be more than friends! -" That doesn't happen in real life...

I liked the pounding heart stuff, though... That's on the right track.

You killed them... *sniff*

aw. tres tragique, but wonderful. glad that haruka and michiru weren't separated in the end :P

Yay! That was a rucking wicked story! *applause*

I got a fish today! I named it "Koi".

IT's prob'ly going to die within the week, but oh well!

It is very sad that the two lovers dies. But the last three chapter i really like.

Thanks for writting

Bravo! This was an excellent story from beginning to end, thank you so much for sharing it! I am looking forward to "Destiny"...

Myosotis

i'm sad that this story is over. but it was awesome. can't wait for you next one. bye!

That sucks that they had to die, but peace was achieved. It is a beautiful story, one that I would read again.

I didn't catch the line from Supers? What was it? I'll probably feel stupid for not recognizing it.

Keep up the good work!

Gosh...That was a bittersweet ending...peace at a terrible cost...but all in all, it was a story I truly enjoyed reading. You really did a great job, from the plot to your knowledge of Japanese culture. I can't wait to read more from you!

aw, nice semi-happyish ending. And yes, i did catch the line from that certain Super season episode.

I've been following this through the whole thing!Gomen I just reviewed now. I'm so glad you updated daily! But anywhoo..its been a great story! Too bad theres only one more chappie...

And I hear an AU to Supers? Ohh! Cant wait!

mmkay! Great work!

This is turning out great:) i can barely wait to see the ending. Kairen is going to have her head handed to her by Michiru...hehe, can't wait for that!

Writing an AU to Super? I am definitely looking forward to that. (as it so happens, I am doing the same for SuperS:)) Good luck and inspiration with your other story, hope the writer's block clears quickly:) I"m sure it will, though, you're a great writer, I love this story to bits!

Myosotis

Wow...That's a good wow, but unfortunately, that's all I can really think of saying right now...just wow...

Briliant!

Aw... why so brief? /

Oh well...it's really sad all this about to end. I've grown attacted to it. The twists were cool and the conflict resolution WAS AWESOME _ it's fun to see that some of the predictions I made came true :D

Can't wait for the finale :)

Ps. I don't mind and ending that's tragic *hint,hint*