i like that version ..i kind of wished that Aragorn did go for Eowyn, i hope you are carrying on because i would like to see what is happening next?

Aw, I love this! Eowyn+Aragorn 4ever! ;D

GREAT!

I KIND OF WISH THIS HAPPEEND IN THE MOVIE..LIKE ARAGORN BEING ON THE COT AND STUFF...wait..*sits thinking*

was it? i can't remember??

PLEASE UPDATE!

OOH! Please update soon! It's nice to see that Arwen is happy that Aragorn is happy! I wish Eowyn and Aragorn got together in the movie! :'(

Well with the odd spelling mistake this is a good storyline. I have often wondered myself about what would have happened if Aragorn and Eowyn fell in love. I actually read somewhere that Tolkien was planning on that happenining but changed his mind and he kept Aragorn with Arwen.

i would love it if you continue with the story
i know it's been a lonmg time since you started with it but it would be amazing if you could finish it

best of luck

=)

please continue with this story!!
i love it
it really touched my heart and i love this couple and also, there are almost none fanfictions about this couple so please finish it!

xoxo
be well

Great chapter! Poor Arwen... Anyway, this was good! God bless!

wo.. nice.. ek! aragorn would defintely take time to stand up again.. aw.. arwen actually left him! ah!

cant wait for the next chapter!

Great story! Update soon! God bless!

tt was a fast update.. hehez.. same 2 words.. next chap?

hehez.. cant wait to see wad happens next..

hahaz.. 2 words. next chap?

though i dun realli like the pairrings, i do nt mind them and realli wanna see wad you are up to.. hehez.. however, do take note of your spelling.. yupps.. is there ani possibility that arwen would appear? keke

Unfortunately, this does not work for several reasons.

More than half of this chapter is simply the script of the movie transferred into paragraph form. As well, in both movie and book canon, Aragorn and Eowyn do not fall in love. I realize, of course, that there are plenty of AU's that support this relationship. If you had several chapters of backstory giving a plausible reason as to why Aragorn would simply abandon Arwen, I would have no problem with it. Just because Undomiel has left for Valinor, it does not mean Aragorn will go after the next woman he sees. If you were not suggesting a romance between the two, I apologise, however, that is what your writing seemed to suggest.

Finally, please run your document through with a beta, or failing that (I realise they are hard to come by), spell check.

- The Irish Mob

Ooh, what a lovely one shot.