 Merel 2007-11-22 . chapter 1What a beautiful little story. I love how you set it up - detailing the facts the reader needs to get their physical bearing, then mingling it so cohesively with Eames' inner dialog that brings pulls the reader in emotionally.
And then the exquisite coup de grace of the tulips -- sweet and touching, with being sacchrine. |
 Scripted Starlet 2007-09-09 . chapter 1 Who isn't? *snorts*
Seriously, join the club, sister.
I loved this. It's got to be amongst your best one shots even if it's obviously part of a series and not the typical stand alone. The scene where Alex comes back and MCS hassles her is priceless. I also liked the bit about Bobby over-feeding her and needing to be released for exercise. It's little bits such as that that make your stories so human. |
 Kyrene once Blood Roses 2007-07-04 . chapter 1THAT'S IT! I would've jumped him in a second! Police filled building and all! God I love him...That was so sweet!!...Sorry...This made me all warm and fuzzy inside. Although my cheek started to hurt a bit in the beginning, lol. The Rocky thing was amazing, I started giggling there. |
 I-am-LMR 2007-01-11 . chapter 1Cute story. I'm so sick of angst! This is excellent and believable, most of the romances i end up saying, 'yeah, right the characters would act that way!' This one rings true. of course he wouldn't forget. love it, Emily |
 untapdtreasure81 2006-12-02 . chapter 1i'm gonna melt with all this sugary fluff...I'm on a permanent fluff sugar high ... BRING IT ON ... again!
Sassy
LOL! and the rocky theme...interesting...i might have do a vid with that :) |
 anonymous 2006-09-20 . chapter 1 Aw. Sequel? |
 InfinityStar 2006-09-17 . chapter 1That was a sweet post-script. Always thoughtful and very easy to love, yep, that's Bobby...and of course, pure and utter B/A fluff is always welcome! |
 TriStateCopFan 2006-09-09 . chapter 1Aww, really good! Just what I was in the mood for! Nice job. |
 obsessedwithstabler 2006-09-07 . chapter 1Aww... sweet. |
 YellowRosesAndHearts 2006-09-06 . chapter 1So important... sigh... You know what, I'm turning 16 in a month and I want Bobby for my birthday. Dress him up in one of his undercover outfits, don't allow him to shave for a few days, and stick a bow on his head. And then, happy birthday to me.
Anyway, I'm digressing. Adorable fic. |
 Lady Taevyn 2006-09-06 . chapter 1Yay. I love fluffy!fic. Wonderful way to go off to work. |
 Greer Bontro 2006-09-06 . chapter 1Utterly charming!! sighs... |
 venenina 2006-09-06 . chapter 1Wow... that was perfect. :-) |
 jenny 2006-09-06 . chapter 1 *sigh* man, you really know how to pry out the sappy romantic side of me. this is great. and the theme song from rocky? lmao |
 Secret Phoenix 679 2006-09-06 . chapter 1Perfect...So sweet and fluffy :D just the way i like it :D |