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The Illustrious Crackpot
2009-01-12 . chapter 7
So it was just a dream? Aw, I was hoping for something less cliche than that. Oh well; the telephone conversation with Negaduck more than makes up for it. XD Great job on this story, and good luck with your future ones!
LuckyDuck29
2008-12-17 . chapter 7
I'm sorry, but Disney characters are just not supposed to use profanity; it's just wrong! To quote my absolute favorite soap character when his boss was supposed to serve him an orange soda, "it is against natural law!" But the chapter was just too funny! Lol, the chicken, Drake's reaction, the phone call... It's a wonder the poor guy retained his sanity!
acosta perez jose ramiro
2008-12-01 . chapter 7
Very funny ending.

Keep the good writing.
The Illustrious Crackpot
2008-10-15 . chapter 6
Oh, Drake. When will he ever learn to think about what he's saying before he actually says it? XD
DarkwingPsycho
2008-08-31 . chapter 6
Interesting. The only thing that's kinda broken the flow of this story is how easily Drake seems to settle into everything, especially that Negaduck is somehow his brother and is rooming with Bushroot (How did Drake know that already without being told?). He doesn't seem overly concerned any longer with getting things back to normal, which feels odd to me. But I'm hoping it will all be explained later. Otherwise, you've got an intriguing plot going on!
DarkwingPsycho
2008-08-30 . chapter 1
Wow, great cliffhanger! I can't wait to read the rest of the chapters you have up, but it'll have to wait until tomorrow. You have a great writing style! And I'm intrigued by your version of Drake's parents. I hope you write more about them in later chapters to flesh out your version of his childhood. :)
acosta perez jose ramiro
2008-08-29 . chapter 6
A chicken... that Gos! Very nice ending.

If replying please do it via e-mail.

Keep the good writing.
LuckyDuck29
2008-08-29 . chapter 6
I love this ending! The chapter was really funny, especially the scene with the chicken. Glad to have you back! Hope things are going well.
The Illustrious Crackpot
2007-10-21 . chapter 5
Wow.

Incredibly bizarre, but that's what makes it so compelling...only complaint so far: during his scenes with "Granville" (awesome choice of name, by the by) Drake seemed much more at ease with his current situation; for example, he automatically accepts Gran as his "brother", and seems to already know about Bushroot living with him (even referring to him as "Reggie")—it just seems like Drake's already become a part of this new universe, that he automatically knows how it works, etc., instead of still freaking out or at least merely guessing his way through. (Sorry if the above paragraph wasn't coherent...it's really hard for me to explain...)

Anyhow, great job so far, and I'll be looking forward to more!
KitchenSink
2007-07-29 . chapter 5
Sadly, I've run out of chapters to read. Let me tell you, I have been enjoying this. You write very well; very clear, and you can switch from sad to funny almost effortlessly. What I like most, I think, is what I mentioned before: you've really targeted Drake's character. He's very believable, between his reactions to everything to the little humorous touches (I could just picture the baby powder thing right at the end here). Also, I've always been a fan of Negs, so to see the hysterical tension erupt between the two is just fantastic.

I'm just as eager as Drake to figure out what's going on in this strange world he's living in at the moment, so I hope you consider continuing this. Great work. Keep writing.

Oh, and for the record, the tributes to Barks and Rosa have not gone unnoticed - as a self-professed nerd, I must say that I love it!
KitchenSink
2007-07-01 . chapter 1
I've been meaning to check this story out for a long time, and now I've finally been able to start it. Ah, I'll always have a soft spot for this show, especially Drake and his unending list of insecurities. You NAILED the internal monologue with this first chapter. It does its job perfectly: introduces us to the issues, the character, and then the ending lines us up for the plot. I also noticed your writing just has this flow to it; if it's intentional, keep it up, if it's not, don't change what you're doing, if you don't know what I'm talking about, I'm sorry, I really can't explain it.

You've created an interesting dynamic with his mother issues (bordering on Freudian, ha ha) - I love to see authors' takes on his parentage. As soon as I get the time I'll read more, as this looks to be a very entertaining read. Great stuff!
laal ratty
2007-04-29 . chapter 5
I can't wait for you to update this as it has really caught my interest. Please update soon. Please?
MizzMegz
2007-03-30 . chapter 5
Wow! This is so much fun to read! And I'm just as confused as poor Drake as to what's going on but I love how you've portrayed the characters! And I can't wait to read what happens next!
loonytunecrazy
2007-02-15 . chapter 5
nice chaptere
acosta perez jose ramiro
2007-02-14 . chapter 5
Very nice chapter. Good job with Drake and the current state of her allies; Morg, a mortician... fits her.

Keep the good writing.
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