Wait! Omg! Who did Veronica gasp at? Who was in the hospital? I'm so confused... I loved the story right up until the last sentence now I'm just confused. But it is a great story!

That was good. Sorry, I was not reviewing chapter per chapter but I just wanted to finish the story and then review at the end.

Veronica really has bad luck when it comes to guys doesn't she? after all those guys before, now, Toby was a thief? I didn't expect it would be Nick and Josh, nice job on the mystery!

Who was at the door? Do you have a certain person really or you just wanted to end the story that way? )

Who is it?

Sigh, Veronica can be a little self-centered, but you gotta love her anyway. She needs sleep though!

Silly Logan! As if she'd forget his birthday. It is hard to see him so alone, but at the same time, a small vengeful part of me thinks its recompense for Shelly Ponroy's party. Is that mean or what? I love Logan, but at the same time, I don't like his jackassery after Lily died.

I love the fact Logan went into rehab! And I hope Veronica will get over her hurt about being left behind; it's not like she's not done the same to him time and again (well, not sure in this universe).

Whooo, kinda like watching the show. Awesome! I love the interaction between the characters, love the cases, the character development, the achy feeling from Logan to Veronica, although I am shocked to read the demise of Toby. But Wallace's was just amazing, what a GREAT best friend. And his last words... "It's Neptune." It's so 'Chinatown'. Nothing they can do. What a cliffhanger! Are you gonna make a sequel?

it's brilliant, I love it ! Well I love most of your stories ! but i love it !

HA! I KNEW Toby couldn't be trusted! He was too good to be true. It's sad that he died...a little...I guess.

I didn't trust Sarah, but apparently I was mistaken on that front. Sad that she died :(

I can't believe you left it open like that with the cliffhanger! And no Logan and Veronica kissing action! BAH!

Veronica's headaches were never addressed...was this solved or what it only important for the one chapter it was really addressed in?

GREAT story! I really enjoyed the heck out of it. I love that Logan got help for alcoholism and everything. That was great to see.

Wallace and Mac sharing some sexual tension? Didn't see that one coming!

-Very- interesting twist with Kendall. They never mention why she didn't react at all when SHE was the one who obviously found Aaron.

Your Logan makes me sigh. I just want to cuddle up to him and never let him go.

Phew, what a steamy ending! Fantastic that they FINALLY did something about all that unresolved tension.

I'm crushed that Mac broke up with Matt simply because he had a trust fund :(

Ugh. I can't believe it was Keith that told him to leave.

I'm really really starting to dislike Toby.

This chapter was just one long emotional roller coaster!

The locker room scene was great :)

Oh no! Not Anna! :(

Logan's memories, self-recriminations and loneliness are heartbreaking! Very well written.

Man, this chapter was missing all the section breaks and confused the heck outta me at first. I'm gonna blame it on the site though _

Yay for TONS more Logan-time in this chapter! You can just FEEL the tension between the two of them...it's fantastic!

"Sitting behind me, probably staring a hole in my back. Generally being annoying." HIL-arious!

I love the Logan and Weevil interaction. Classic.

Veronica obviously loves her some spiced apple scent. I think you described Toby with the same scent. Coincidence?

I'm confused. I thought Mac DID have streaks in her hair...purple ones in the chapter she was drugged. Did you mean that she just changed the color of them after Beaver's death? I like that you show how she's moving on.

The scene with Logan in rehab is great. I'm glad that we got to see him in there, rather just just hear about it. There were some intense moments there.

Hil-arious inclusion of one of her Pan High "friends." I love that you take elements from the other seasons for your season three...it's really how it should be! I mean, of COURSE she'd probably run into some people from high school at Hearst! Expensive or not, it's a local college!

God, the Scott/Jamie/John storyline was horrible to read :( It was definitely heartwrenching.

I love that you just leave it open, and merely imply that she vents to Logan on the phone about everything and feels more chipper in the morning because of it. She obviously needed to talk to someone who could understand and that's not Toby.

Crazy Kendall twist! I'm interested in seeing where this is going to go.