great story. please update it soon.
lg cathedrals

I love the story! The only thing i have to say besides absolutely adoring it and i love the idea is Ephram doesn't have an i in his name so i recommended for the upcoming chapters that you change that, but otherwise keep writing!

This is REALLY good. Oh man, you got me hooked! Keep writing, and I will definetely keep reading! Hooray for hints of ephramy. :)

great! i like it so far! i love this kind of story so please update soon :)