I love your story!
The Au is great, and Natsuki makes a great pirate :D
I can't wait to read more chapters!
Please update soon ;)

-sniff- Stupid boat, stupid Aoi. She should've made up her mind earlier D:
Anyway.. I hope you update sometime soon, since this is a really good story. (:

Everyone seems to have a mystery they've been keeping from everyone else. Chie with Aoi, Mai with Takumi, so on.. D:

Wow.. I hate that captain..

Hahah, I like this chapter. Very suspensful. (:

XD I like the ending, when Natsuki starts rambling.

And gosh, I feel bad for Chie ):

Ooh, Aoi is soon to make an appearance :)

Naolin, just wanted to say that your stories are some of the best in this community, and your updates are worth the wait. I hope you will discover your inspiration again for this fandom. In the meantime, take care.

Okay I think I’ve been very patient but I am not Job and the mountain has failed to come to me so consider this a flame. I mean this with all the keys on my keyboard; UPDATE!

I cheered when you go to the Chie/Aoi part because I have a soft sport for them and I want to see them live their butch femme happy ever after. I also want to see how Shizuru reacts to Natsuki though I may have to reread that bit because it’s been so long since I read that that the story has gotten cyber cobwebs.

Consider this a prod. Prod.

So I gave this theory.

You WILL continue this story, yes? And it WILL be good. Otherwise, I will bribe you with pocky.

Oh yes. Pocky.

And it will be laced with crack, or some other habit forming substance

Soon, you will rely on me for this 'Special Pocky', and I will tell you 'NO!' and laugh manically.

You will beg, and I will tell you, 'Finisher For Whom The Wind Blows, and you will get more!!'

And you will.

And it will be good.

It's not fair, really. I really like where this is going.

I suggest you finish.

.>

I really don't have a more threatening...threat then that.

Um...please? :D

dude this story rocks! you got me when yu aded the dream of "betrayal" and when shizuru was trying to escape by atempting to seduce Natsuki. I cant wait for an update. sorry you feel like not enough people are reading and you lost your muse. it is a really good story though. it may be selfish but i think that you should really finish it like you said you would in this side note thingy.

Gwah, PLEASE CONTINUE THIS. I'm dropping a line.

It is all so good, just like all of your other stories. I love the plot, the characters and the relationships. Please. Or maybe just write another amazing ShizNat and/or ChieAoi fic.

I just read, good words! I look forward to more!

I just found this story, and I am happy that you are going to finish this because it is a good dtory and I want to see what you do with it. I await your update.