I love this little peek into Jayne's head. Where did you learn all that medical/religious stuff?
This is a cute story about loyalty. I love it!
^_^

-->KayleeTam

This was very touching.

I just went looking for Jayne fanfic for the first time today, and this was exactly what I was craving, so thanks for that. I think you captured him very well, both his own thoughts and others' impression of him.

Thanks for sharing.

This made me cry and smile at the same time, so I'm guessing you did good. Keep up the good work.

I liked this a lot! It was very well done!

This should have been a real episode.

Oh. Wow.

Seriously good fanfic here. I am touched and amazed by it.
You obviously have a knack for this writing, as all the characters were perfect. You really captured them.

My one concern was the bit with the 'fat moth' but this is purely down to my almighty fear of them.

I am truly hoping that you've written more and, if not, I am encouraging you to. Keep writing.

very enjoyable. I always enjoy Book/Jayne interaction.

That's sweet. I like dogs. This is where I go into this story about how this dude changed the world for the better no less cuz his dog got killed helping him. His name was Jacob Riis, so look him up. It's a neat story. Kinda like this one, but you know in the 'real world'