 Jtoasn 2009-02-20 . chapter 1sharing the same aura! Aww... that was such a sweet line! |
 MadHatterMCR 2008-06-16 . chapter 1Oh my God, I can't believe I didn't write a review for this yet! Its one of my favorites; I've read this story about ten times and I still adore it. I love Kayashima and Nakatsu together and so few people have written about them.
I think you wrote Mizuki and Taiki's words and everything exactly as they would be in the manga/drama.
Thank you for a wonderful story. :D |
 Prince Phoenix 2007-11-07 . chapter 1OH MY GOD THAT WAS SO WONDERFUL! That was the absolute most sweetest thing I have ever read! I swear, I'm getting cavities right now! |
 The Gentleman J 2007-09-03 . chapter 1I loved how Mizuki caught Kayashima off guard!
-jack- |
 Fake Is the New Real 2007-06-24 . chapter 1So cute! XD |
 The Liquid Moon 2007-02-16 . chapter 1Am I glad I came across you! You really write very good one-shots. This is the second one I am reviewing, heh. But its well worth it. Your works' really inspiring me to do some Hana-Kimi of my own, haha. ^_^ |
 Bishop Sasarai 2007-01-14 . chapter 1Whe! I was going to give up that there was anyone else whoo absolutely adores the Kayashima/Nakatsu couple! I ADORE them! ^^ (I can't say it enough) I wish it was more canon though... Anyways, keep writing! I love your style, it fits right in with the manga, I could see that scene being in it, and that's always a good thing. (When you're a fan of something, anyway.) I can't find anything at all to criticize: it was well written, no spelling mistakes that I saw. It all flowed very naturally.
Keep writing! |
 Disintegrating Vortex 2007-01-10 . chapter 1Yay for Kayashima love! |
 KR. Hetarei 2007-01-07 . chapter 1omg so cute! I'm the 5th reviewer, and PROUD of it! I love Nakatsu/Kayashima, and I think you should write another chapter. A "Confession" so to speak. |
 rokovoj 2006-12-26 . chapter 1...Hoo.
That was too cute for words and I can't find any mistakes to pick at. Very nice job. |
 yaoi-is-wowie21 2006-09-26 . chapter 1Aw, that was so cute! ^-^ Nakatsux/Kayashima is one of my favorite pairings, and you wrote this so wonderfully. I love the ending, and the line where Mizuki tells Kayashima that his aura's the same color as hers. Heeheh. Awesome job. |
 Hyper Girl of DOOM 2006-09-14 . chapter 1I love this! And I can't believe that someone else loves the KayashimaxNakatsu pairing! This is so well written. |
 sdl 2006-09-12 . chapter 1 I like this. I never really thoguht about Kayashima/Nakastu, but it works.
You could continue with this...just a thought. |