|Reviews for Chronically Late|
| Birdie 6/20/11 . chapter 7
Wow, I loved your fanfic, but it was so sad. (
You did a wonderful job of creating each scene. It really drew me into your fic.
Although your ending was sad, I don't think it was overused. I only recall seeing this kind ending in 1 other fanfic.
Well done. P.S. You should really mark this as complete XD
| sweetsarcastic 10/27/08 . chapter 7
Filled with fluff, and well written. The ending has been used before, but I still loed it. Thank you for the story!
| ShhListen 6/27/08 . chapter 7
i feel so sry for sukara and syaoran
i really hope this dosent happen in tsubasa
| cheng 6/23/08 . chapter 7
well that was depressing!
| cheng 6/23/08 . chapter 6
YAY! SAY YES! ahahahaa.
eriol and tomoyo are so cute.
| cheng 6/23/08 . chapter 3
| cheng 6/23/08 . chapter 2
ahahahaa. nice chapter.
| cheng 6/23/08 . chapter 1
ahahaha niice iintro chap.
| BipolarPenguins 10/7/07 . chapter 7
| buddhabelly 9/28/07 . chapter 7
omg! that started so cute! why the abrupt ending? it gots me confused
| Queenie 8/16/07 . chapter 1
I...*chuckles*...just so happen to hate anyone...*laughs*...who kills off any half of...*whips out knife*...(in a whisper)Sakura...and...Syaoran. *walks slowly toward Numina*
| Musette Fujiwara 4/21/07 . chapter 7
no she isn't late anylonger is she?
MAn it was so sad, you know I really thought you'd make it an happy ending, not like this... You probably wanted to kill me right now...
Thanks... For telling me what the mourning clothes in china was I didn't have a clue it was white.
About the squel? I don't know how you'd make it. It can't be a S&S due to the fact you killed her! But it would be nice to see where your imagination would take you...
| S.A.Blossom 4/15/07 . chapter 7
and this is supposed to be a humor story HOW EXACTLY? Not that I'm saying you wrote a bad thing or anything, the story was so nice but I actually CRIED!
maybe I didnt read it good enough, can you please tell me if she really did die or no? although I already think I know the answer.
and if she did die then change the genre plz.
| Acaylee 11/20/06 . chapter 7
So sad… ;_;
One tear fell out, one tear blinked away and a few more tears fell out but after a while… so sweet and sad… would that be bitter sweet?
She was an angel…
This could have been a one shot, I reckon that would have been better because it’s so strange to suddenly skip five years between an interval of a chapter… and a story is usually way more developed and this is kinda short n sweet… like iris dreamer’s ‘Through Your Eyes’, that worked as a one shot except it was SO long... I lub that. Yeah, I reckon this would be a better one shot than a chaptered story because you skipped a lot in their relationship, just showed the beginning of the romance, got to the end, showed their first encounter… a chaptered story would have the romance blossoming but you entirely skipped it to the end…
"So do I, always and forever will."
That’s so sweet… I’m glad I read it… even if I was supposed to study for history and commerce yearly tomorrow.
As for a sequel… how will you be able to write a sequel? Sakura visits Syaoran ten years later as a ghost? Syaoran dies and they finally can be together? Pretend nothing ever happened? Time travel back and stop everything?
They all seem pretty weird ideas to me… though I would like to see how it would happen… your ideas, my ideas for a sequel for this is pretty limited and wacky. Maybe you could do something like iris dreamer’s ‘Grace Of An Angel’… another one of her one shots. Yes, I really lub iris dreamer…
Like Sakura visits Syaoran as an angel… you would have to read it to understand. It’s sweet and it works, maybe a bit fast though. That would be the only idea I say would work for this as a sequel, because you made a pretty definite ending for this.
| Acaylee 11/20/06 . chapter 6
OMG! That’s so sweet… except I must say it was kinda fast. He had a fight with her and wasn’t even that sure she would come yet he still had a ring… weird. But sweet nevertheless.