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kirroth
2009-07-16 . chapter 1
"“I smell really, really bad,” Sheppard observed from behind his legs."

lmao. That was probably the best short fanfic I've read in a while. Just what I was looking for, a little treat before bed. Drunk/hungover Sheppard is fun. XD
Dr. Dredd
2008-02-19 . chapter 1
I was going back to reread some of my old favorites, and this occurred to me: you have Rodney and John throwing up on Carson's shoes with disturbing frequency. There's this story, there's Triptych, and I'm sure there's a few others I'm forgetting. If I were the good doctor, I'd make the boys take me on a nice, expensive shopping trip back on Earth. :-)
heartfallen
2007-11-14 . chapter 1
Amazing story! It had everything! Thanks for reading and sharing
LinziDay
2007-10-18 . chapter 1
LOL. “Clean up, aisle two” Excellent story.
La Madrugada
2007-03-29 . chapter 1
I loved this fic! What an amazing combination of angst, friendship, comfort, and humor. With so many great one-liners, like 'Evidently chocolate cake, Lucky Charms, Crown Royal, basketball, and crashing from Wraith enzyme didn’t go together as well as they had originally thought'. Definite new fav!
shywalk
2006-12-23 . chapter 1
Except for the puking, I loved it LOLOL Great banter between them
ManicTater
2006-10-18 . chapter 1
I loved this one, too. I'll have to wait and read more of your fics later. I should really get to bed. You're definitely going on my favorite author list :)
Shakia
2006-09-23 . chapter 1
Wow, definately in my favorites; I loved this to death! Love how long it was and everything you covered with the boys. Lol, and them being drunk you wrote so well! XP I always end up loving your stories and was totally sucked into the entire thing and loved all of it so much ^^
mouse8
2006-09-11 . chapter 1
Another wonderful story with great characterisation and humour. Loved it!
melisande
2006-09-09 . chapter 1
An awesome story about an awesome episode from an awesomely great author. River, I love your characterizations, the voices of your characters are spot on, and you handle the relationship with just the right balance of snark and smarm! As much as I love the slash stories by you and koschka, thank you so much for keeping a line of stories gen. Please don't stop! If I could think of any way to improve this story I'd tell you, but I can't find it -- excellent concept, excellent execution, just the kind of missing scene I long for in a great ep. Thanks again for sharing your talent!
Ditzyleo
2006-09-08 . chapter 1
Deffinately one of the best tags i have read! Great dynamic beteween the two! ANd i actually lol at times! Very good!
Trishkafibble
2006-09-07 . chapter 1
Perfect! Lmao, and lovin' the friendship. Nothin' better!

Keep on doin' what'cha do! ^^
Trish
sherryw
2006-09-07 . chapter 1
Tee hee that was absolutely hilarious and sad. You know that John was acting that way because of what happened to him. But leave it to Rodney to make the comments. I actually found myself laughing outloud at some parts. Thanks for the great read.
Sepik
2006-09-07 . chapter 1
I liked it. :huge grin: It was fun to read.
drufan
2006-09-07 . chapter 1
They're magically delicious! Add some whisky and you're good to go. Marvelously wonderful image of a basketball game in fast forward. Pieces of the cereal on my kitchen floor falling out of Rodney's hair is priceless. The need for reassurance, well spoke. Another fun ride.
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