Reviews for The Colour of Envy

Reviews For: The Colour of Envy - Reviews: Page 1 of 4

Tom 2007-12-30 ch 1, anon.	abuseGreat story
hurtinphoenix 2007-02-25 ch 1,	abuseomg this story is ace...i thnk u shuld continue it coz seriously this has the potential to be an excellent story anyway great story
Elves of the Moon 2006-12-21 ch 1,	abuseYAY! I absolutely loved this one. It's a shame I only found out about its existense now (I should have read it the day it was posted) I can easily immagine Brooklyn obsessing over Kai and indeed, Kai was definitely a couple with Tala during G-Ref :) Tala and Brooklyn are so much alike, when it comes to appearance of course. Theu both are taller than Kai, have fiery-coloured hair (thought Brooklyn's is a bit more orange I think) and both have eyes tinted by blue (Ice-blue for Tala where Brooklyn is more green-like to my opinion) Tyson was only able to win his match against Brooklyn because of the strike Kai had dealt earlier on. (you know, once tasted the defeat... a second time is on the way because you now know what it can be like... or something like that) Anyway, I thank you to present us such a marvelous fic and until I read you again in another one ;D Lhune
ColdBlackRaven 2006-11-27 ch 1,	abuselike always. A great story.
Kirie Hiiwatari 2006-11-05 ch 1,	abuseOh my! Poor Brooklyn! I'm glad he's with Tala though...perfect couple! That was really good Ladya writers block? Dont think so! Keep up the good work!! Kirie x
Gypsy_Willow 2006-10-18 ch 1, anon.	abuseI absolutely love your style of writing and this story was perfect. I liked Brooklyn's point of view and the fact that you made his thoughts so analytical. So many times people write him as flaky or out of it but he is a genius after all so it makes sense he would always be analyzing situations. Normally I like Kai with Tala or Ray but Brooklyn would be an interesting pairing if done properly and the way you write these characters I bet it would be a great story and yes I admit that was a hint for more ;)
Sam 2006-10-04 ch 1, anon.	abusecan't remember if I said this already, but you could prob make this a great story if you so chose. Having said that, I like it as a oneshot oo. Leaves more to the imagination.
J.J. Banks 2006-09-21 ch 1,	abuse-raises hand- Interested. That was an interesting take on Brooklyn's POV, I quite enjoyed it.
Sam 2006-09-17 ch 1, anon.	abuseI would love for you to develop the plot further. I feel you left us a cliffhanger there. (i knew it was Tala when you said 'Russia's 2 most fearsome bladers') Please continue. dying to know what happens nxt. Just try not to hurt Tala ^_^, I love the Tala/Kai and the Rei/Kai paring Sincerly, Yaoi luvr
Nameless Little Girl 2006-09-16 ch 1,	abuseloved it!
marsdemon 2006-09-14 ch 1,	abuseWow! This was lovely! Gives me so many ideas, I think you should write more. I would definitely read it.
Ceriadara 2006-09-12 ch 1,	abuseO_O Well, that isn't ominous at all.
animepie 2006-09-11 ch 1,	abuseOh my, Brooklyn is such a jealous cutie. I don't really think that he can do it: get Tala out of the picture. He's very close-minded isn't he? He doesn't know of such things like close bonds. It would be interesting to see how far he would go to make Kai his. evil grins
YuriyTalaIvanov 2006-09-11 ch 1,	abuseinteresting...write another chapie! ^_^
Yunnu 2006-09-10 ch 1,	abuseYour writing style is just ... beautiful. Keep up the good job.

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