Oh my parts of that were just too funny! I love the interaction between McCall and Control. Very nicely done!!

OH now that is just downright MEAN! :P That's got to be the worst cliffy yet you should be shot firing aquad style for that lol but I want more so I'm willing to hold off for a bit :D

Oh I was right you ARE evil! Cliffys out to be outlawed. LOL But I like Cobal figuring out Control set it all up uhm DUH. Good story!

Oh that is so not fair! Cliffys are against the law somewhere I'm sure :) hope the wait for more isn't too long.

YAY another great chapter! It was worth the wait now uhm the wait for more won't be so long I hope ;)

Oh yay another chapter. I can't wait to see how this comes out. Very intriguing storyline.

Control is a devious little monster isn't he? I like it! Very nice job.

Oh very nice! I liked that. Thanks for writing such a good story.

Oh thank you for posting again so soon. And its a very nice chapter indeed! I can't wait for more. Hope you post again soon and keep on writing.

Oh come on! That cliffy is just RUDE lol. You can't leave us hanging like that. This is a great story please please post more soon!

Good story so far. Thanks for posting another chapter! Can't wait for the next one.

happy to find more of this fic.enjoy watching mcall in action.please update soon.

Looking forward to next installment with bated breath

Just found this and I hope you continue with it it's a great story so far and I can't wait to see what you do next!

dont make u wait so long for the next installment - getting too good to be left hanging for so long this time