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Twillight Bunny
2008-02-24
ch 1,
abuseAhahahaha man this was just too cute!

A little teddy bear doing the can can... lol
Doomedy
2008-01-12
ch 1,
abuselol the "instantly downing a room full of diabetics" part made me laugh X) and you write cute fluff :P
crystal cerberus
2007-08-22
ch 1, anon.
abuseaw
GlassOnion
2007-04-11
ch 1,
abuseSweet.
Talking teddy bear? It's so... typical for Jack's way of thinking^^
Imagine100perc
2007-03-27
ch 1,
abuseDon't beat yourself up; some of the best stories I've wrote haven't been mapped out. That was pretty good (but the bear whas a LITTLE scary).
TamerTerra
2007-01-27
ch 1,
abuse*squeals* M, that's good crack!
breenarose
2007-01-19
ch 1,
abuseCool.
SoLeo
2006-12-11
ch 1,
abuseI liked it! I myself cannot write fluff either. This was a valiate effort to cause me massive tooth decay.

It's going to be sad when they have to take the heart of jong out of the bear T.T
adelinia
2006-12-05
ch 1, anon.
abuseXD

Juracan's song is so cute and funny!
tomoya-542002
2006-11-23
ch 1,
abuse*laughs* omfg, this is just to cute! i love it, adding it to favs!
Kaboot
2006-10-28
ch 1,
abuse-gasps for breath- Oh gosh... Okay. THAT WAS STINKIN' HILARIOUS!
I've never forgotten the whole Rai-sleeps-with-a-teddy-bear thing, but I never gave it much thought. Still, this was awesome! And very cute. Good job.
Happy:)
2006-10-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseAdorable:) I think his ‘kinda sorta’ friend should turn into his ‘kinda sorta’ boyfriend;)
lilviorX
2006-09-29
ch 1,
abusesho cute! amidst all the angst you forget about writing cute little stories about two little boys and a teddy. very glad i read this, it's put me in a good mood.
lil
Silver Neo
2006-09-22
ch 1,
abuse*falling over giggling* Holy potatoes that was awesome! I'm seriously crying from laughing. What a completely cute story! And it's so well written too. I can't believe I'm saying this, but the beeping and panicked Jack-bots were the best. Just...cute in a way. *gigglesnort* Of course, all the stuff you write is good, but this was just cute.

So, yay for cute and yay for you! n.n
Fishheads
2006-09-13
ch 1,
abuseyou kidding?
t'was great!
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