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| Twillight Bunny 2008-02-24 ch 1, | abuseAhahahaha man this was just too cute! A little teddy bear doing the can can... lol |
| Doomedy 2008-01-12 ch 1, | abuselol the "instantly downing a room full of diabetics" part made me laugh X) and you write cute fluff :P |
| crystal cerberus 2007-08-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseaw |
| GlassOnion 2007-04-11 ch 1, | abuseSweet. Talking teddy bear? It's so... typical for Jack's way of thinking^^ |
| Imagine100perc 2007-03-27 ch 1, | abuseDon't beat yourself up; some of the best stories I've wrote haven't been mapped out. That was pretty good (but the bear whas a LITTLE scary). |
| TamerTerra 2007-01-27 ch 1, | abuse*squeals* M, that's good crack! |
| breenarose 2007-01-19 ch 1, | abuseCool. |
| SoLeo 2006-12-11 ch 1, | abuseI liked it! I myself cannot write fluff either. This was a valiate effort to cause me massive tooth decay. It's going to be sad when they have to take the heart of jong out of the bear T.T |
| adelinia 2006-12-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseXD Juracan's song is so cute and funny! |
| tomoya-542002 2006-11-23 ch 1, | abuse*laughs* omfg, this is just to cute! i love it, adding it to favs! |
| Kaboot 2006-10-28 ch 1, | abuse-gasps for breath- Oh gosh... Okay. THAT WAS STINKIN' HILARIOUS! I've never forgotten the whole Rai-sleeps-with-a-teddy-bear thing, but I never gave it much thought. Still, this was awesome! And very cute. Good job. |
| Happy:) 2006-10-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseAdorable:) I think his ‘kinda sorta’ friend should turn into his ‘kinda sorta’ boyfriend;) |
| lilviorX 2006-09-29 ch 1, | abusesho cute! amidst all the angst you forget about writing cute little stories about two little boys and a teddy. very glad i read this, it's put me in a good mood. lil |
| Silver Neo 2006-09-22 ch 1, | abuse*falling over giggling* Holy potatoes that was awesome! I'm seriously crying from laughing. What a completely cute story! And it's so well written too. I can't believe I'm saying this, but the beeping and panicked Jack-bots were the best. Just...cute in a way. *gigglesnort* Of course, all the stuff you write is good, but this was just cute. So, yay for cute and yay for you! n.n |
| Fishheads 2006-09-13 ch 1, | abuseyou kidding? t'was great! yo |