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| Sinfonia Rossa 2008-08-14 ch 1, | abuseLoved it. |
| Master Ickolas 2008-07-21 ch 27, | abuseSimply the best present-based Zelda story's ever. This is what the site needs, a well written story with good grammer and well placed humor. My rating 10/10 0-|10 |
| Fairy Tale Reader 2008-07-07 ch 27, anon. | abuseI must say this story is one of the best I have ever read, and I have read many. I found absolutaly no quarell with this story (which it suprising because usually I burn people for making there stories modern) other then the fact you didnt have a love seen (Yes im a pervert, but then again, who isnt?) You had me roped the whole time, congratulations for a truly captivating story -claps- p.s. I was serious about the Sex scene, I almost groaned in dissapointment when you didnt have Link & Zelda just go at it after the pool scene |
| sakurahanaalice 2008-06-23 ch 27, | abuseWoah. I had a major Deja vu when Zelda said "On my life and heart, I solemnly swear to continue to do so." Heehee! Koume and Kotake are always there at the perfect moment. They have fun personalities. :P And to think that Anju came up with the "Only in Hyrule" line. Well, technically it was you, but Anju said it in the story and what I'm saying is that it spread from there. Now it's probably a popular saying. Huh...I actually might say it to people...hm...This was a great story! Good job! |
| sakurahanaalice 2008-06-23 ch 26, | abuseSQUEE! YAY! IT'S ABOUT TIME LINK! THIS IS MY ABSOLUTE FAVORITE CHAPTER! :) :) :) :) :) :) :P :P P P :P :P :P P :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D GB)0: (it's Elvis Presley sideways with his hairdo, his sunglasses, a smile, a weird-ish body, and little feet) About the smiling thing, I think they said that Oprah, I watch it every now and then with my mom. Okay so, Link is going to be part um...well, I know it has to do with the castle...just what is it exactly...hm...here are my guesses: 1. a staff member, 2. the royal muscician, 3. the head royal guard, 4. an assistant of someone, 5. the queen's (in this case Zelda) personal guard, 6. um...Sheik's student, 7. Royal crime investigator, (although that would be a good job for Vaati :P) and I don't know what else... Okay, I'm just going to see what it is now. |
| sakurahanaalice 2008-06-23 ch 25, | abuseyay! Vaati saves the day! ZELDA WINS! :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :P :P P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D Bye bye Ganny! hahahahhahah! *cackles* |
| sakurahanaalice 2008-06-23 ch 24, | abuseHuh. Then that means that cartoons lie! The people always scream "red alert red alert" and it can mean from fire, to burglary, to someone about to be killed, to someone screaming like a lunatic. Liars. I can't believe big, bad, and ugly tried to kill Zelda! Evil! |
| sakurahanaalice 2008-06-23 ch 23, | abuseFine. *sniff snif* Make us suffer. Go ahead. Be that way. *cries from suffering* |
| sakurahanaalice 2008-06-23 ch 22, | abuseOoh! It's finally happened! Squee! I hope Link won't be hard on Zelda. He shouldn't though. |
| sakurahanaalice 2008-06-22 ch 21, | abuseOh, I can think of quite a few possibilities for the Mr. Knuckle episode...I won't bore you with all of them... |
| sakurahanaalice 2008-06-22 ch 20, | abuseHm. Visitors from Termina? I guess I'll read and see what happens. |
| sakurahanaalice 2008-06-22 ch 19, | abuseHey, did you know that Woot means "wow loot" from dungeons and dragons? My friend researched it because she was bored. :P Yay! Link and Zelda were drunk! Yeah, I was wondering when Vaati would come in, but I figured he'd show up eventually. |
| sakurahanaalice 2008-06-22 ch 18, | abuseHehehehehe. Blackmail. :) The godly trio are helping, that's going to give Zelda points. |
| sakurahanaalice 2008-06-22 ch 17, | abuseOh! Ganondorf trouble! That's BAD! |
| sakurahanaalice 2008-06-22 ch 16, | abuseHm. Maybe I should count once I finish reading the story... |