 killroy777 2007-09-25 . chapter 7dam |
 Princess Asuna 2007-08-22 . chapter 7wow nice story its kept me on the edge of my seat please please PLEASE keep on going with this story. Will there be any panda bashing at all? lol |
 angel61991 2007-07-26 . chapter 7interesting please update soon. |
 Dragon Man 180 2007-07-22 . chapter 7Very evil stopping place. Stupid Kuno, he's always using magic without understanding it and now it has backfired on him. I wonder if he'll break free of Garyx's control if Akane is threatened?
Oh yes, is Ranko a dragoness in human form or a normal human? |
 taxzombie 2007-07-22 . chapter 7Well obviously you didn't kill off Ranma, but where he is? I'm wondering if his attachment to Nabiki will have something to do with his return.
As for Kuno, it the moron is dead, good riddence. I've always considered the Kunos prime material for a good Darwinism.
Well ya left us with a cliffhanger, I be back to see what branch was grabbed.
Thanks for posting. |
 taxzombie 2007-07-22 . chapter 6Poor Ranma, looks like his plan to nail Kuno came back and bit him on the behind. It's not like he was trying to do something evil. Hell, Kuno needs to be taken down. But to create his own fiancee out of the air, chaos and murphy must have been sitting on his shoulders waiting for thier chance at mayhem.
I'm always on the lookout for an enjoyable fic and it appears that this one meets the bill. Looking forward to catching up. |
 Lord Nightfyre 2007-07-21 . chapter 7You are a evil evil man. Need I will have to wait till the next chapter. I didn't even see Ranma losing. Great twist. Looking forward to that next. Cya :p
Nathaniel B. |
 Tai Khan 2007-07-21 . chapter 7You seem to have skipped a considerable portion of backstory. How did the others react to Ranko's sudden appearance? If she has Ranma's memories and abilities, is she too a potential dragon god? Does 'she' have feelings, and a bond, to Nabiki as well? How did they all wind up sharing the same bed?
Kuno's apparent foreknowledge of events can not be explained by the 'prophecy'. After all, he had 'killed' the red-haired girl the day previous, and yet he comes to the school fully prepared to do battle and fully expecting to see the girl he'd killed the day previous as well as a black-haired boy he'd never seen or heard of before. Even knew his name.
You've the basis for an exceptional story here, but you're moving too quickly in some areas and skipping others entirely. |
 keichan2 2007-07-21 . chapter 7OH! MY! GOD!
Now, you REALLY have to update soon!
I NEED to know what will happen next!
Please? |
 Dumbledork 2007-07-21 . chapter 7Excellent work. |
 Innortal 2007-07-21 . chapter 7Okay, weird end. Hope more comes soon. |
 FalseExact 2007-07-21 . chapter 7glad to see your still writing, can't wait to read more |
 Bobboky 2007-07-21 . chapter 7what is the difference between the two posts, i did not see one |
 Rose1948 2007-06-08 . chapter 6Different. *nods thoughtfully* Be interesting to see how this develops. |
 Vilkath 2007-04-02 . chapter 6Hmm nice story, almost seems you gave Kuno the soul of the other dragon. Just thinking of a perverted crazy like him with all that power makes me shiver. Add the family wealth to it.. well it's not pretty. On the other side the coin, I like what you did with Ranko. Not only does it give way for Ranma to have a multi pairing relationship, since you established Nabiki bi sexual, and already atracted to his girl side. But just all around crazyness since what he going to do about a body? I can see Ranma putting up with creating a corpse. He probably would have trouble creating a body then killing it, even if it was a souless vegetable. But for him to kill a living soul just to frame kuno? I some how doubt it. Where this leaves his plans, who knows. And not to mention poor Kasumi's blessing. Like ranma said, different gods do different things. Knowing ranma's luck, her patron godess happend to be a love goddess or something. Fringe benfit of attracting women ;) I can't wait see more from Kasumi's role, she's been many things in other fanfics. But I do believe this first time I've read her being a cleric/priestess. She's been compared to Belldandy several times in fan fiction.. almost be the most suitable goddess for her. Goddess of present, with heavy undertones to nature and life. |