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I really enjoyed catching up on this, can't wait for Naruto and Kushina to meet or at least talk also Hana meeting him. The build up in general has been nice and all but I'm looking forward to some of the results. The only real complaints I have are from the first couple chapters the just don't jive ya know logic flaws, but it would be pretty hard to spin it perfect so if we play along with them it makes for a very fun story. So finally, Thanks for writing and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Although, I hope if Kushina survives long enough she gets to give certain bastards hell for this. They do deserve it.

Bwahahaha I like it :) 1 chapter and you've already caught my interest.

Lol, Naruto is sneaky bastard, I find it hilarious that he can always avoid ANBU, Jounin, Chuunin, etc. when he wants to.
Why's he leaving again? Oh, you didn't say? Bleeehhhhh, KEEP READING

Oh... Well that sounded lovely. Naruto and Itachi must've been having SOME party in there!

OH NO! Itachi! WHYYYYY! You were horrible and then you got awesome! Why you act all mean and wierd?!
Bleeeeehhhhhhh Kakashi shouldn't have lost, my friend is about to cry, or start screaming in rage and I can't talk to her, its actually kind of funny XD

Whaaaaaa-? You can't make Orichimaru likable! Its just not done!
Thats like taking the creepy, old neighborhood watch guy and inviting him over for a sleepover to talk about his accomplishments in life! "Oh so you became the neighborhood watch guy? and...? Oh. and you've taken a liking to several young, sweet girls have you? thats just lovely I hope it works out for you"
Just no. No. Nooo nope nopity no. That just doesn't happen :P
Lol, if I didn't know any better, I'd believe you though! Don't get me wrong, Orochimaru is a... Compelling villain, but he creeps the hell out of me *shiver*
And WHO exactly is goin' all "Step away from the boy" on Kakashi?
Oooo I have a good idea, i'll read the next chapter and find out!

Hmm... That was a pretty accurate description of my face, but then my face twisted up and I looked all confused according to my friend. Plus, I'm chewing on the drawstring of my hoodie... Don't know why, but whatever.
This should be rather interseting though, I shall move forward IMMEDIATELY! (I probably spelled that wrong...)

Ah Hana. One of my favorite Naruto pairings.

Nice to see shes back.

This is why i always like evil Minato. Cause Kushina scares the shit outta me. Imagine if she was evil like Hiruzen. There would be no elemental countries. Only the mighty whirlpool empire.

Hes kind of an ass, but he has got to make up almost ten years that Hiruzen wasted. Ten years that he could have been preparing Naruto. Ten years to stick him with a loving family that could have raised him with a love of knowledge, self discipline and a body ready to begain training.

Instead Cyrus has to destroy ten years of bad habits, then reform him into something passable for a ninja, and finally into an unstoppable wraith. A living shadow. A true shinobi. One that doesnt rely on massive destruction, or is stupid enough to think that the rasengan or raikiri could be classified as assassination techniques.

A soul reaper that is unheard, unseen, unnoticed...unknown.

Yeah! Her memories are back.

Now, in the words of Drowning Pool, Let The Bodies Hit The Floor.

Now i really want a three way battle. In one corner, the evil sons of biches in the same organization as Orochimaru. In another corner the supposedly even more evil organization. In the final corner, Naruto and Kushina!

Thats right! Two Uzumaki's against everyone else. Kinda seems a little unfair, maybe Kushina and Naruto should blindfold themselves and tie their hands behind their backs. Lol.