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| M.S Arashi Sumeragi 2006-12-19 ch 1, | abuseAoshi eating candy, thank u so much for writing this *-*!! |
| Shinken16 2006-09-17 ch 1, | abuseI LOVED IT! I actually can't even imagine Aoshi bawling. It's too weird! HAH! Okita ROCKS! And Misao finally got her kiss...aw... |
| janey-in-a-bottle 2006-09-08 ch 1, | abuseThat was HILARIOUS! It's so easy to destroy a reputation. But even Okita SHOULD have had more dignity and concern for his own reputation and not running around like a little kid. He was a swordsman (and a good one) after all. Seems he doesn't care. ^^ And it's much more funny this way! And I have to agree with your first reviewer. Aoshi's POV on that matter would be nice to know. Either after he's himself again or even during the whole incident (since you had that little hint that he was aware what was going on while he was possessed). Anyway, great job on this story. Had me giggling from beginning to the end. |
| raine 2006-09-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseei this was cute especially okita isnt given much attention. and how funny aoshi must be. eniwei short but cute. |
| Miss Daydream 2006-09-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseO__O Oh my gawd. ... WOW. Good job, I'll never have a peaceful night's rest again. (It was nice to see that the ghost was Okita, though... ^_^) |
| Kishofwings 2006-09-07 ch 1, | abusethat was great! I always liked Okita Souji (also from Samurai Deeper Kyo) and i loved how you brought him into Aoishi's body! Just picturing Aoishi bouncing around Meiji Kyoto City with candy crumbs on his face bring tears of laughter into my eyes!! 'specially like Aoishi/okita's kiss with Misao!! great job! :) |
| Kay-san 2006-09-07 ch 1, | abuseIt was good! Although I would have liked to get Aoshi's reaction once he wakes up. Oh, that would have been priceless! The thought of Aoshi walking around with candy smeared on his face is quite an entertaining vision. Anyway, good work! Hugs & Kisses! |