You know i completely agree with you... I only noticed it about a month ago and I was like 'Holy heck! Remus Lupin was in love with Lily Potter!' It was just so obvious... the whole 'Oh yes... I knew her. She was there for me at a time when no one else was' i tell ya that was intense...
But i just looked past it cos it's not in the book and i thought: Well if it's not in the book then it's not true.
What do you know, a few days later i read a few comments from J.k Rowling herself and she said that some things in the third movie had been added in and were not in the book... She was surprised how on mark these things were. And i thought "OH MY GOD HE WAS REALLY WAS IN LOVE WITH LILY POTTER!"
Of course i could just be reading into it too much because I love this ship, but she did say it, and that was added in and it was a very obvious sign.
Anyway story... review... right. lol Lets get down to business shall we? I LOVED THIS STORY! It seemed real to me because she did kind of object to it and Remus didn't push it any further because of that whole noble thing. And i loved the ending... LOVE IT!

It's great. And I totally agree with you Remy was so in Love with Lily, according to the movie. I don't think we'll ever know if she loved him back!

I loved it