well, hinata and i feel similarly in that last case. icky-tasting indeed...

Oh that was WONDERFULL :] Oh joy! Really I can`t get enough of this story.. and honestly I won`t mind if you continue.. how they lived after..together..happily. Maybe a small sequel :] Sorry I just can`t help but aks you to write some more.. Please!

i loved it tnx for writin it!

tht wuz a gud ending but im sad tht it ihs ova! yhu rox! if yhu whant tw make us all happy, make more!! i ♥ yhu!

i love this story and this pairing.
i so wanted it too clear up more stuff.
you shjould say screw this im writing another part to the story.
that would be the best christmas present ever!

damn this story is hot

That had to be the sweetest lemon I've ever read! XD I loved it!

dang that was hot ::blush:: xD good job!

Aw...Now I'm happy ^^

yyay! happy ending!

OMG! that was so good!

loved the whole series. i wish you'd do a next one. and by the way your reader dosent do a very good job. the words are spelled right, but a lot of time your tenses are wrong.

Gosh I LOVED your series it was so faithfull to the characters! I was like WOAH! You had a stray bit of gramatical erros here and there but nothing aparent. If you are ever in need a BETA don't hesitate to ask I would be more than willing! Um yea thats a bout it great job!

:O ^_^ yay! I love this story! I was about to scream at '5 years' but you have redemed yourself and I absolutly love this ch./sequel!

HELL YEAA GAARA X HINATA FOREVER =pp awesome oneshot. longest oneshot i've ever read i think =p