Wow. I did not expect that. I can't believe you turned Andrew, Seiya and Hota(ru) evil. The drama is building up!

Wow, you created an amaz9ng suspense scene back there. Right now, I NEED Serena to be doing something! She can't just sit and cry! I can't wait to read on... :)

I am amazed by this. i like all your other fanfics with Serena and Darien, but this one is really interesting! I love how you incorporated all the SM characters! :)

I absolutely loved your fanfic :-)! I felt really sad when Endymion died (poor Serena). I hope that the her and Darien go out together. Once I started reading the first chapter, my eyes were glued to the computer and I just couldn't stop reading! The betrayal of the guardians really through me for a loop though. I hope that Serena can have her own happy ending though...guess I'll have to wait and see.

I can't wait to get started to read on the sequel to this but that has to wait until tomorrow though, lol.

Keep up the very good work!

EagleBlaze

All right. Let me start by saying that you're absolutely ** brilliant. I feel like there's really not much more I can say to express how amazingly good this story was. If you're still thinking of turning it into an original story and publishing it, you totally should.

And now I'm off to start the sequel.

AH! I'm so sorry, I accidentally clicked enter when I was even less that half way through my review!
This story was truly amazing.
It was well written and well thought through, just simply amazing with the power to lure me in being hooked, scrolling eagerly through the chapters seeing what would happen next.
This was the first fanfiction story EVER to almost make me cry. Literally. And that's a really good achievement. I'm not surprised with you thinking about this story for more than seven years, because the plot is so brilliant that-no, YOU'RE BRILLIANT.
Everything is connected in this story-so that no one would ever skip. Truly brilliant, and fascinating. This is my favorite story of yours so far. I won't be disappointed when you make another masterpiece.
What was best about this story was that it had the right type of drama that left me hanging on the edge of my seat, the right touch of romance. You sure know how to make chemistry between Endymion and Serena.
I can't BELIEVE I didn't take the time to read this all earlier. I just wanted to let you know, before I click submit, that you deserve every review because this story is amazing and should be published into a book xD or an animated movie on Sailor Moon haha xD
I'll definitely read the sequel, because you left me with a cliffhanger :P
I'm sure Darien's going to be in it alot. I'm excited and I'm going to start on it very soon.
Keep up the amazing work Alicia-and also say thanks to your editor for me. She also did good work. :D
Keep it up! Looking forward to reading the sequel!
(P.S. That was the longest review I had ever made..O.O)

Amazing.
I can't say enough words to give my praise to this story-but this is the most amazing story of Sailor Moon that I have ever read ever.

I really loved your story. I didn't like the fact that Endymion died. I really felt like there should have been no Darien in her world and Endymion should have gone to her world like he had said he would. I just felt like she's able to save everyone and give everyone a happy ending accept herself, and that makes it a tragedy to me. The fact that she's in love with both is too confusing for me, since there was no development of her and Darien having a relationship. It's your story though, so I respect how you ended the story. It was still very well written.

i'm totally crying i kinda wanted her with endy, because theres no hints that she'll end up with darien. It feels like a tragedy story. *cries*

ok - fantastic story!
... i actually like the ending ... i read that there were a lot of flames bout endymion dying, but i also believe that there was no other of it to go and she was never going to stay there anyway

BUT CAN I SAY

i knew she was briar rose! i didnt know how or what would happen but i knew she was briar rose! go fiery dancer! LOL

and that was one hell of a twist - i did not guess that the guardians would do that, but my liking to andrews character could have blinded me to the signs

QUESTION: if the guardians were bad guys - why did they make serena fix all those little side stories?? that was never quite explained...

well... if i remember correctly there was a sequel to this AMAZING story (if you can - i really think this could make a great original story!) and i will now start reading it!

thanks for the story!

Heh heh, the "knock some sense..." into him part is very amusing. I love the way you write. ^_^

this story was amazing.i managed somehow not to cry (though, admittedly, i did get misty eyed). seriously, i feel like i have no busines writing after reading this. i'm toying with the idea of deleting my work. i really hope you publish this. i will be at the bookstore with a copy for you to autograph. i'll be the dorky girl in line who keeps telling everyone how i read your book on fanfiction before they even knew it was cool. i can't wait to read the sequel.

First off, I want to say THANK YOU. Thank you for giving me an opportunity to entertain my nostalgia for Sailor Moon. For about a week now, I've been forlorlny meandering on this site, trying my very best to find a story that could hold my attention, but each and every time I would hit the red x even more I had read more than 3 paragraphs, bored as I was already. But your story, this one and its sequel, has given me quite a bit of joy for the last 3 days, as I read it obsessively:)

On to a little bit of critique: Well, the only part I can really say that I am disappointed in this story is the characterizations and the love stories of the outer scouts and their respective princes. I understand that this is a fairy tale, that this is why love at first sight is possible four times over, but I also say that since this is your personal take on the fairy tales, you could have altered to make their merely fairy tale romances a little more believable...flush out their interactions, add details and more interactions, showing a progression from like to love. I would say Nephlite and Zoicite were the two worst cases, but at the same time, they were the two cases most faithful to the fairytales...I guess what I'm saying is, I would have liked more explanation really of why they were falling in love, rather than love at first sight.Or maybe I just wanted you to write even more, making this lovely story even longer:)

Other than that I would also say that the characters of the scouts/princesses were a little flat, and all pretty much the same. Mina, Amy, Lita, and Raye were all nice, sweet, beautiful...individual quirks or traits weren't given much of a shot to shine though.

If it seems like I'm hating on your story, I'm not. I've been a devout AliciaBlade fan for eons and I would definitely say that this story has taken over the place that The Professional had so unbudgingly occupied just a few days ago, the place of the number one Alicia Blade story ever. Endymion was just the way I like him cocky and I like how you gave him the gift of an unbridled curiosity...more details on his and Serena's relationship would have been great as well, but I'm guessing then your story would have reached Harry Potter size...not that I would have complained. I fact, that is where the strength of the stroy lies, in its complete and believable fairytale world. Just like J.K so wonderfully did, you too were able to completely transport us out of our seats and into another world, with all the lush imagery of that world in our mind's eye. And this, something I've never seen you do before, is why The House on Thornrose Lane is, unquestionably, my favorite AliciaBlade tale.

I liked it how you ended it - it gave it an open-ending and allowed the readers to determine how the story should ultimately end. That was so amazing!

“Don’t stray from the path to pick wildflowers or your grandmother might get eaten?”

LOL! Oh my gosh, that was just... perfect!